|Reviews for Total Command|
| phaedria.steam chapter 5 . 12/8
Mei is the very definition of abusive in her toxic relationship with Izuku. At this point, she's worse than Bakugo. I know they get together at some point, so reading these early chapters makes me sick.
| phaedria.steam chapter 4 . 12/8
I've read this twice now. Both times, I'm bothered by how unnatural Izuku's behavior is. I get he's a Shonen protagonist, but he's way too nice to Mei and Bakugo. Maybe this is a flaw in the writing of My Hero, but even saints would be pissed off at those two in Izuku's shoes.
Mei tricked Izuku into being a pack-mule to help Mei build something to beat him into the dirt, and she didn't even have the decency to apologize when it was over. Anyone other than a saint would have slapped Mei into the sand and left her unconscious. Don't even get me started on Bakugo, lol. I just know she's gonna suffer in her own way during the course of the story, so it's nbd. Mei should have been made to suffer a little bit for this incident.
| DeltaWolf2038 chapter 24 . 11/28
I don't think I noticed that the first holder is still afo's brother the first time I read this fic. that means iUku isn't the first male with a hidden quirk
| Jamie Charlton chapter 2 . 11/16
Love this book so much
| Edyyyy chapter 12 . 11/5
Fucking cringe this is stupid chaprer 11 and 12 i was good untill u made deku have anger isues and stupid also why did u not just make mineta not exits this is just stupid
| PunishedRaiden1 chapter 24 . 11/2
Mei says OUR boyfriend and I just have the soviet memes in my head lol
| arispuffer chapter 40 . 10/30
This is really well written and I cant believe you going to do that to Tiger it brought up so many questions about how they are treated.
I thought this would just be that kind of story nut it turning beautiful
| ASD Fictions chapter 42 . 10/29
What a coincidence... I'm reading this at 2 AM
| Excalibur PrimeLvl30 chapter 3 . 10/16
I love the fact Inko threatened All Might without knowing that she did.
| Excalibur PrimeLvl30 chapter 58 . 10/13
You do realise FFN don't really care about that type of stuff as long as you make a warning before the sex scenes, you can do something like you do for the notes saying "WARNING Lemon scene if you don't want to read it skip to the next bold text" I have seen a lot of authors on this platform do it and FFN is cool with it the only times they aren't cool with it is when a author doesn't put a warning, also I have seen stuff that if you put it on site for children you are going to have police at your door type of stuff on this platform and the only reason they are still on here is because of the authors putting a warning and a disclaimer about not supporting that stuff before and after it, so it is ok to have it on here just put a warning so people can skip it if they want to.
| A3g1s chapter 14 . 9/20
I take back what I said earlier. Nozomi is definitely the biggest troll in this fic!
| A3g1s chapter 4 . 9/20
This machine is such a troll.
| Legion of Dreams chapter 8 . 7/31
Moments with uraraka always make me lose interest in most fics. So much for control.
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/28
Parts of the font look like Wingdings
| EldritchAnon chapter 10 . 7/26
"This chaotic good shit is getting old," Aizawa
No it isn't Eraser, dont lie to me!