Nice work

He got twenty nine points in the first two minutes but only nine in the following six? It doesn't track

Me gusto mucho el primer capitulo, sigue así!

From 'Katsuki' to 'white-hot flames', you need to separate them to make it easier to read plus "Something." needs to be a separated paragraph on it's own with two and a half sentences maximin to make it easier for readers to read the story. For more skills, go to 'He Was Born In A Dungeon And Raised On Monsters Milk!' which's a Manhwa manga. You'll get more skills from there.

Sigh.
This is a cardinal sin of fanfiction; giving the unique power of the main character to someone else or otherwise allowing it to be taken, copied, or so on. Letting Bakugo read the main character's skill book and gain his own elemental companion is exactly that problem.
I'm gonna keep going, but I'm one foot out the door on this story.

Ive read this whole fic twelve times i neeed the next chapter

I feel like you were moving a bit fast this chapter.

"The Path to Isolation"? Not to subtle, but a very good choice in song.

*sighs* I really really wanted this fic to work I love mha and just once would like to see a gamer izuku who doesn't get nerfed. I will say this though you at least nerfed him in a way I'd never seen before by pretty much turning everyone into a gamer with as fast as they all learn magic and skills. It completely defeats the purpose of even make midorita a gamer in the first place... *Sighs* and I had such high hopes too... *Sighs*

This would be better if midorita and bakugos relationship was contrary and occasionally hostile like in canon

And now you have ruined your own story. Giving mana to others ruins it...

Didn't expect that bastard became an evon more bastard.

Didn't expect for Aizawa to rename his hero name.

Wait a minute...
Are you going to "AFO is Izuku's father" route!?

... did you happen to write this part before the past users was introduced in canon?
I'm pretty sure that Ichigo wasn't the First name.