|Reviews for inuyasha jelous?|
| WITCHBLADE86 chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
i like this give more.
| The Black Flame Phoenix chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
ok nice fic so far but bad way to write it. You need to put spacing between dialog and filler writing. What i mean is when you write you need to do this:
Ok otherwise noone will read it cause its too hard to follow. Oh and you need to make sure its not all bunched like this when your thinking something do it the same way as talking ok cause this was very hard to follow. just suggestions not a flame. But you could get flames otherwise.
update soon ok.
| Yuxi chapter 1 . 8/15/2003
AW! that was sad! but i luved it though! keep writing! _ *reads story again*
BTW, thnx SO much 4 reviewing my fic and Love Without WIngs chappie 3 will be up in abt a week cuz pwer outage and everything.
Bye 4 now (UPDATE!)
| entanglednthorns chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
i like it! plz update soon!
| ssjinpan2 chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
Nice plot going. Me want more!
| Flam1ng1c3 chapter 1 . 7/4/2003
It's good! Please update soon!
| Shigure's lover chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
i luv it, but when are u gonna update?