Man this was great and the only story of this genre for Artemis Fowl.

Um...You've been spelling Eoin Colfer's name for the whole entire story you wrote. Not to mention all the horrendous typos you've written.

can you please update? this story is soooo good and i want to read more

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS, OTHERWISE I WILL TAKE THE LIBERTY OF HAVING A FANFIC BASED OFF OF THIS (WITH AN ACKNOLWLEDMENT TO YOUR FANFIC, OF COURSE). BUT, PLEASE FINISH IT! I WAS REALLY ENJOYING IT!

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I think that it is just fine that you want to rewriting. Will you be posting that you have re uploaded on here or will it just be in your listings and I have to check in every now and then?

please continue

Not bad, you could have a few more interactions though, and Holly seems a bit to angry/testy.

I can’t wait for Artemis to be embarrassed when his first thoughts on Holly are read out (in fact the only one i could see being more embarrassed is the on the comments are aimed at, ie Holly).

Please actually finish the story there's so many incomplete reading the books fanfics please don't let this become one. It's the only reading Artemis Fowl I can find

Great first chapter!

Great first chapter!

Really good please keep writing
Though I don’t understand what you meant by You gave it away at the beginning we also share a pen name lol