love the fic

Ohhh ssiiihhhhttttt but true

Ohh sshhhiiiittttt

please continue this story I'm not one to normally dark mc's but you've made this character incredibly interesting, the story simply continues to draw me in.

Why would he give her the sword of gryffindor? It’s seems dumb of him

There is quite a bit of similarities between Grindewald and Charles could be an interesting theme to explore ?

This is one of the best fics and I hope we see an update soon…

I'm still gonna keep reading... but why does it feel like more and more stories lately have a sociopath MC that manipulates everyone around them... kinda wack

Wow it’s a shame this story is dropped. I really enjoyed it

Please UPDATE this fanfiction Author!

and the thing that runis all gamer fics. the stupid dungeon stuff. always boring. always ruins any sort of interesting progression in skill and abilities.

An overlord going for the overhaul look

I think this is genuinely my fav gamer fic, most are just recycled and plagiarised but this one is fresh and full of good ideas! really hope you finish this one day!

Amazing chapter and amazing story

The ONLY thing I think you could work on, is going back to previous chapters and running them through a spell checker. There are quite a lot of times where you mistake "you're" and "your" and "to" and "too", as well as other mistakes like " protogo" instead of "protego".

That's a very minor issue and doesn't detract from the quality of the story though, thank you!

NOOOOOOOO WTF NOT THE GNOMES

I knew he was a sociopath but this was the first time I was confronted with the reality

Good job author, I'm enjoying this story lol