Reviews for The Doll Gamer
Guest chapter 16 . 10/27/2020
Phoenix can't die without a special substance so you have to subdue the phoenix that can make itself catch on fire, we ain't crazy ya'll
lonetigar20 chapter 23 . 10/26/2020
Awesome can't wait for more :)
Umbra chapter 20 . 10/26/2020
Recommendation for special quests for future years
Achievement:
(1) Become Head-boy - use this to 'influence' folks
(2) Become Quidditch captain - from yr 3/4 or play in junior professional league
(3) Become #1 in study grade - OWLS/NEWTS/all yr rank #1
(4) Become prankster king - Surpass past pranksters (weasley twins & marauders)
(5) Playboy king (?) :D
Xion chapter 23 . 10/24/2020
Thanks for the chapter. This is one of the top tier gamer fics out there :D

Between having dragons and controlling gangs I'm looking forward to what else MC is plotting, haha.
For the Spell-phone invention, I would suggest some runes etc to be used. It would improve MC's repertoire too.
I enjoyed the interaction/character build up of others, that's what differentiates a good book vs others. Having only gamer MC's POV will make for a dull book.
I liked the fact that MC is doing mundane tasks (clovers, santa etc) to complete quests :D. It adds a lot of flavour and dynamics to the plot.

Carry on, hope ur doing well.
Stay safe and stay awesome :D
Lord Parthas chapter 17 . 10/24/2020
It is literally a magically sword that if you put a lot of materials in it it can be made better, and probably get special abilities.
Doesn't it really seem special to you? He could also have sold her for a huge quantity of Galleons, many more than he had to give the girl.
SirMaou chapter 6 . 10/24/2020
I feel sad for the gnomes
linkiepie2214 chapter 23 . 10/17/2020
Well this is unique and hope to see more soon. And why not have a dungeon base around horror films that is only open on Halloween that he has to beat in order to get the elder wand? (Movies like saw, aline, and teh like.)
KHD6 chapter 23 . 10/16/2020
I hope you update soon, this is a really good story
F077 chapter 23 . 10/3/2020
Este fic es increíble me encanta ya quiero leer el siguiente capitulo súbelo pronto por favor
F077 chapter 9 . 10/2/2020
Este fuc es buenísimo me encanta
F077 chapter 5 . 10/2/2020
Este fic es buenísimo me encanta gracias por estar escribiendo una historia tan buena
F077 chapter 1 . 10/2/2020
Me encanto el capitulo está buenísimo y me encanta la actitud del prota
Korvust chapter 23 . 9/30/2020
I just caught up and wow. I love it!
uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 23 . 9/30/2020
Ahem I think It's more than enough time to update a new Chp. din't cha think?
JamesRook chapter 23 . 9/23/2020
I think more explanation needs to happen for why he wants to be known as a magical creature, because given what he knows of this world he should know that's not a good thing given the prevalent racism. Why he used the Martial Arts outing that as well in a nothing tournament he could win anyways, kinda screwing his partner over a bit there.

Is he really fooled by Oswald? Charles seemed to agree with the fake test. I thought he'd caught on to who the guy was given you said he observed him and his quest to take over London would be faster given what he learned.

Anyways, just some minor critiques, overall its a great story so far, just found it the other day and finished reading it.

I didn't really comment on the other chapters but he's done some odd stuff like giving up the Sword for practically nothing. I'll bet Daphne's going to have to give that up now to save herself from giving away the martial arts books.
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