Reviews for The Doll Gamer
Mastersgtjames chapter 6 . 8/30/2020
so... Numbed emotions listed MC needs 50 WIS before something. I'm assuming before it lessens its effects, or it is countered. But nothing like that happened...
Mastersgtjames chapter 4 . 8/30/2020
always kinda annoying when the MC has to struggle tooth and nail to improve. Their stats and level going up slowly. When someone like Ron Weasley, who is literally doing nothing, is leveling faster.
Mastersgtjames chapter 2 . 8/30/2020
some of those stats seem WAY off... Like, 60 INT for intermediate transfiguration? unless points or levels come easy, that seems like a ridiculous requirement when that should be aroun 4-5year classes.
Aside from that, Story would be better without HP/MP. instead just use statuses, or percentage. that way you do not need to try and quantify damage. Like is he down to 1HP? is a slap to the arm -1HP? honestly, HP/MP work fine for games, but are terrible when trying to make a gamer like interface that should match up with the REAL WORLD.
Dingirverse chapter 23 . 8/26/2020
Great chapter!
Beast Of Destiny chapter 23 . 8/26/2020
eagerly waiting for the next update...
Oigresz chapter 23 . 8/17/2020
Me encanta tu historia continua vas muy bien
Gregorvich chapter 23 . 8/13/2020
This is great! I cant wait for the next chapter.
Ranmaleopard chapter 23 . 8/12/2020
This is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue
ExiledValkyrie chapter 6 . 8/12/2020
1. You should write your game of thrones story. 2. Did I read some people calling Charles, Richard?
King of Alchemy chapter 23 . 8/12/2020
if Charles combines magic and marital arts can he do something similar to bending in avatar the last airbender.
TheHonestOne chapter 23 . 8/12/2020
I just had an idea for a dungeon. Use flight lessons to unlock a dungeon with sky islands, there could be monsters that fly in the sky which attack you, you could have interesting ores, and plants on islands.
Masquer Q chapter 23 . 8/10/2020
Awesome gamer story. I feel like it's weird having enemies more than twice his level getting prounced by Charles. And not having a challenge with serious repercussion might be a problem for the future where he just keeps beating everyone in his path without much effort. But I like the story thus far and would love to read more.
Thanks and good luck with your writing!
P34644563 chapter 3 . 8/9/2020
couldn't he theory use the room of requirements like a gravity room like from dragon Ball z to make himself stronger and faster. cuz all you have to do is imagine it has so and magic of the room of requirement would take care of the rest.
drvash chapter 23 . 8/9/2020
Is Flitwick obligated to inform Albus Dumbledore of Charles’ heritage test or the possibility Charles might be a Phoenix Clan experiment?

I’m trying to figure out if this story has a Manipulative!Dumbledore who may see Charles Bell as a future asset, motivating the headmaster to use his Ministry contacts to get Oswald Blackgate’s analysis.

I guess it depends on the impact of Charles using True Martial Arts and Mana Reinforcement at the dueling tournament, and whether Charles needs to place into protective custody "for the Greater Good".
webzayne717 chapter 23 . 8/8/2020
There's too much focus on one country, find something else to fill the gap, please. Having rankings for esoteric skills is incredibly silly, you have a breadth of possibilities open to you, and hundreds of branches of magic to choose from; in and out of pasture.
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