Reviews for The Doll Gamer
Hitmen101 chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
Thanks for the chapter. :D :)
Fullmetal319 chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
I just started reading this a few days ago, but I'm already all caught up. The story keeps my interest and is a fun take on what a gamer can do in the potter-verse. I can't wait to see how some of the long term plans turn out. Keep up the good work!
goblin chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
welcome back
JoeMcLuvin chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
Dungeon idea for Warding: Charles enters the dungeon and its basically a crystal maze type. He has to collect 7 keys from 7 different rooms, each room has a rune stone in the centre which powers wards he has to disable, break or circumvent. Once thats done a key materialises by the rooms exit for him to collect. Each room could be a different challenge, so he doesn't need to always break the wards, it could be he has to soak a towel so its wet, but inside a ward that keeps it dry. The exit door will have 7 key holes to exit. Or it could have 5 key holes and you make 1 or 2 wards incredibly difficult to break so he gives up. This will add a challenge for him whilst sharpening his skills. The rewards could be a rune stone for him to practice small scale wards on.
itsMARWIE chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
Hey, cool!
Since they're watching Alien, how about an Astrology dungeon lol. Don't have anything more to add to that.
Inritus chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
Does Charles know he might have just caused more problems then Daphne might be able to handle? The dual makes sense to end quickly but I feel like you've just exposed Charles to more then he himself can realistically handle even with having the power of the Gamer. I can easily see the Ministry send Aurors after him and have him sent to the Unspeakable for testing. It would be laughably easy for them to make up some crime to get him, especially since he's considered a muggleborn and doesn't have the same protections as a pureblood.
Ghostcraft9 chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
How about an Alice and wonderland themed dungeon for charms class
Loke13 chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
Very good
Guest chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
Hate to be that guy but it’s bollocks not bullocks.
Acqua OfThe Back chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
Gracias por el capitulo
Yinko chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
The question is, is Daphne going to connect the dots regarding the deaths of her competitor family?
TM11 chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
Astrology Dungeon: it has twelve levels, each with one of the Twelve Zodiac Spirits as a boss. Each level would represent the planet that each sign are affiliated with. For example, Aries' level would be based on Mars (so greater gravity than Earth's) maybe have some monuments made of gold or diamond since those are also affiliated with the Aries sign.

For each boss that Charles beats, he can gain the weapon of choice of the boss the first time he beats them. If not the weapon, than a weaker version of their main power. The grunts of each level could be either other constellations, or smaller and weaker versions of the creature that is the boss. Like, for the Aries level, the grunts would be rams. Humanoid Rams, monster Rams, etc.
fvdv123 chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
fun chapter
viniL98 chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
Thanks for the chapter, I loved the way you portrayed the competition. Charles showing more of his talent is always welcome.
CupaLupaBell chapter 23 . 8/2/2020
Didn't the chinese dictator killed all of the Chinese wizards ?
Why do you really want to include China in Harry Potter world? Are you from there author?
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