That was a whole lot of WTF is going on. I had no clue what you were writing about. None of it made any sense without any background or anything.

That's because you completely skipped the best part that we all wanted to read. Taylor smacking Sophia and Emma down or just avoiding them masterfully and making them look like fools without showing off that she has powers.
Everyone wants to see them put in their place and you deliberately skipped it.

Shame this one didn't continue, I'm not expertly well versed in star wars stuff, especially when it concerns revan stuff, but dang if that wasn't gripping as hell.

interesting couple of bits here. I AM currently reading Empress Ascendant.

this short reminds me of Here's the new boss...

I will admit that I am a sucker for a good Revan story, but I really do hope you do more with this.

Awsome

more please!

This one was very interesting. Something for us to think on on our own since you're not updating, at least.
Knew it was Obi-Wan as soon as you described his hair

Scarecrow would probably find the idea of trigger events fascinating. Interesting snip.

EXCELLENT
MERCI POUR LA LECTURE

Too bad this one looks as if it couldof been fun