Reviews for The White Returns
Merey chapter 14 . 11/14/2015
I loved this story when it was written and I still love. Thanks so much for sharing it.
Linda chapter 14 . 3/31/2015
Since Sophia is only 33 yo, I would have loved to see her raise more children with Luke and enjoy the escapades of their offspring.
Miss Katastrophic chapter 14 . 12/10/2013
That is a horrible ending to an awsome story. You didn't say if Ava lived or not!
Guest chapter 14 . 6/25/2013
omg what happens to ava. what is tyler and presley up to. that cant be the end. please continue x
yotoots chapter 14 . 5/22/2012
Awww can you update I want to know if Ava lives
T.L. Wilson chapter 15 . 1/9/2011
You know what I hate? The fact that no one on these boards ever seems to be able to finish a story. That's really messed up!
RomieForever chapter 15 . 8/15/2010
ahhh no you cant end it like that what about ava this is sooo mean i demand more lolls please -huggles you- pretty please
sara-ranae chapter 15 . 10/21/2009
it was all really, really good i just hope your not going to leave it like that thow. you got to keep going "please"
brenda chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
you need to tell what happens after she finds out their is a way to flip better and easyer keep the story going and tells what happen
lori chapter 15 . 8/22/2009
no that can not be the end does their little girl make it through the change and i really hope she does cause it would be tragic if she didn't and plus i think that Presley should die and their daughter is the one to do it cause i think that would be perfect and she should be white and her brother the same color as their father :D
dkwr07 chapter 15 . 6/26/2009
hope there is more. please update soon.
blondiee chapter 15 . 6/23/2009
Im really confused! That cant be the end because we dont know what happens to Ava! Also I didnt like how L&S were forced to marry. They should have come together on their own terms.
MaasaiGirl chapter 15 . 12/5/2008
Can't wait for a new chapter! I hope your still writing it!
Tiffany chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
I REALLY LIKED THE STORY I'M NOT SURE IF I POSTED ANYTHING ON THIS PARTICULAR STORY BUT W/E I HOPE YOU DECIDE TO FINISH THIS STORY SINCE IT SEEMS YOU HAVE STOPPED
RiaRath101 chapter 15 . 1/27/2006
loved the new part

But that's the end?

It can't be

Angel
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