Reviews for Through the Veil |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Harry and Ron should reintroduce dumbledore to muggle drugs |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was interesting and well written. Your writing style evolved significantly as the story progressed. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() MYSTERY OF DEPARTMENTS? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a fun oneā¦started off a bit cracky, got a bit over-serious for a bit (but actually more interesting and engaging), and ended well, with an epilogue of pure fun. Nicely done! Going to check the sequel and other stories now, thanks for posting! |
![]() ![]() I'm going to assume that Dumbledore in this version of the Harry Potter universe is slightly cray cray I'm fine that, it suits him |
![]() ![]() ![]() No dinner? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Terrible, boring story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Being 13 doesn't make booze taste different than when they were adults... Are you a child or an idiot? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The fic started as somewhat entertaining, but the last 5 or so chapters were an absolutely directionless trainwreck. Everything around the Yule Ball was either boring or cringy as fuck, the sudden drama with Harry/Jim was annoying and certainly didn't belong here, and lastly, this chapter was stupid in every way. You seem to have lost any semblance of actual humour along the way. Not gonna bother with the rest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait they do reproduce asexually? |
![]() ![]() ![]() And pettigrew is also a masochist |
![]() ![]() ![]() I KNEW PETTIGREW WOULD BECOME THE NEW KANYE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn this is amazing what a wonderful story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() So fucking drunk they think the veil of death is a time-traveling device WONDERFUL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so many different worlds and genres my mind is exploding with the ideas Star wars Star Trek Stargate plus many others I enjoyed your stories now to find another author I can favorite thanks for taking the time to share your Muse with us |