Reviews for Grey Path
Le Faucon Bleu chapter 9 . 7/9/2019
I've always thought that Revan's fall/descent to the dark side, as a means of preparing to fight Vitiate's empire, was in part caused by a loss of hope. It seems like you are cueing into that also. Great chapter, thanks for writing.
god of all chapter 9 . 7/8/2019
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
SocietE chapter 9 . 7/2/2019
Good job so far, please continue.

You have good pacing, clear paragraphs, and interesting dialogue.

The story itself has potential, so I truly hope you don't abandon it.
JourneyRocks13 chapter 9 . 7/1/2019
Excellent chapter. I believe you captured Mission and Canderous perfectly in this chapter. Well done. Cant wait to read more
TheMistyBlackCloud chapter 9 . 6/30/2019
Can't wait until the next chapter
general-joseph-dickson chapter 9 . 6/30/2019
Nice chapter
derzank146 chapter 9 . 6/29/2019
HK knows what's up.
Neeros chapter 9 . 6/28/2019
Cool!
Incognito74 chapter 9 . 6/28/2019
I can express how deeply I appreciate this take in Revan’s personality as a Dark Lord. It just feels so... fitting? Totally how I would expect him to act and more. And having HK-47 in the story sure improved the story quite a bit. Keep up with the awesome work!
WalkersMadHouse chapter 8 . 6/25/2019
I love your take on Revan, adding a aura of mystery but also staying true to his character before SWTOR butted in. You are an inspiration for me to want to think of other ideas (despite my track record of not updating). I will admit that I didn't care for scenes that didn't involve Revan (but I'm biased as he's my favorite character), but even reading those I had no real [objective] complaints. I am really excited where you'll take the story! Good job and keep it up!
saloesxn chapter 8 . 6/16/2019
Omg, I love this so much ️️
JourneyRocks13 chapter 8 . 5/20/2019
Sounds like they are preparing for a fight! But perhaps a conversation with the sand people chieftain also... hmm...
general-joseph-dickson chapter 8 . 5/18/2019
Very nice chapter
god of all chapter 8 . 5/17/2019
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/17/2019
there's my favorite droid
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