Reviews for Grey Path |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well now, i'sn't this a little hidden gem I have stumblem upon. I am very much looking forward to seeing where this story goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start to the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting concept you got going on, can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love how Revan shows that the force isn't just light and dark. I've always thought him to be just that, a combination of those two, in control of both but not dominated by either. Anyway my ramblings aside, another good chapter and I'm really looking forward to the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely looking forward to where this will go. No Taris means no Mission, Zaalbar, Canderous, T3, and no Ebon Hawk. So I wonder what you are planning |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this interpretation for the prologue of Kotor and would love to see more of this. There were a few grammatical hiccups during when Revan's duel with the Jedi started though. Namely: you started switching from past and present tense with the actions being performed. Just remember to stick to one or the other and you'll be fine. |