but...no? percy should be overall more powerful...how much time has Andy been training for? because i fell like just because of that, percy should be a lot more powerful, or at least more in control of his powers. but, i feel like percy can tank way more. like WAY more.

NOOO I DONT LIKE THIS YOU MADE HER TO OP. STOP

LESGOOO DUDETTE PERCY HAS ENTERED THE CHAT!1

This is amazing! I love the storyline so far

Annabeth isn't a Lesbian

It feels like you are making Percy weaker and weaker with every new chapter. First he defeats Titan, then he manages to defeat Giant, then he almost gets killed by a senator with a knife and now he can’t even beat Clarisse, who is weaker than canon Percy. It feels like you were trying to make the fight interesting, but instead it just feels stupid. What’s next? Percy will get beaten/almost killed by a satyr?

Bro kill Annabeth already. I hate her in every single PJO fic enough that I dropped them all

im sorry about those people being idiots. but do you know that the prequel of your story is on reddit for really good roman!percy fanfictions? those people are probably just ungrateful for flaming your story.

this is AMAZING

Besr thing about this chapter is Reyna forgetting that his lungs fill with water when he breathes down there

Too lazy to log in, but just wanna say, authors like you are what give me the strength to wade through the usual harem, slash, non-con nightmares. THIS is the kind of stuff I hunt through forums and archives to find. Well fucking done

In what chapter will you reveal the parent of Frank Zhang?, great chapter btw.

this got emotional. I dont think Leo will go back in canon after hearing this.

bruh, what the hell, are you remaking a fight against the two camps?

THAT...was unexpected