Aww, I really liked the old Shanks and Hoku scene. It was fun to see Hoku get back at Shanks. Now it's gone.

I love this fanfiction so much. When is the next one, I can't wait.

I love this with my whole heart. Seriously, it's so amazingly fleshed out and put together! You're an incredible writer. Can't wait for the next update. I wonder who the main love interest will be? I'm hoping Zoro, or Law (he's my favourite character, so-).

Love the fic, but even now, Nike's interaction with Shanks in the bar back in the past still felt romance coded. Not sure if it's been changed.

And Jesus, what a fic. Loving it so far. Kinda slowed down around the middle, but I'm glad I got through the backstory stuff.

What the heck is Unknown 1?

Okay so I binge read this story and I love it so freaking much! Gahhh I don’t know who I want her to get with! I like the dynamic she has with Ace, Sabo would also be an epic choice! And then there’s Zoro, and don’t forget Law! And then Kid having a meltdown about being ditched lol. Shanks is also a beautiful contender that smexy man. Whoever she gets with I’m down for it. Ohh also would animals slowly start to like her more as she starts to lose the Will to off herself? Cause she’s gonna grow out of that eventually right? So it’ll be funny if her creations slowly start not hating her as much and she doesn’t even realize WHY they are being that way. Gosh I’m so ready for more I really hope you update soon!

Hiatus? Dropped?

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Can someone explain the flashback mess that is this chapter because it just feels like the author wats the maximum cliffhangerness with absolute zero resolution to any of them.

Not a bad setup, now I guess I just need to wait.

So she gets sick instead. Every death to her is going to hit Luffy hard I imagine. He'd view it sort of rightfully as a failure. Then again I guess it might not kill her despite your setup with the cold earlier.

The road to hell is paved with good intentions.
Anyway, you took quite a while to get through the past arc there. I guess we'll see if it pays off later.

Ah, so she died once after she left the initial island. I guess that means Luffy probably doesn't know she has multiple lives. Nicely done.

Ah, when she said 7th life I thought she meant she had died 6 times already. She's counting down, that's a lot less disturbing to me.