probably my favorite one piece fanfiction very fun

llove the first 2 chapters great stuff so far

Loved this story! Holy shit the part with Usopp telling Hoku stories just like he did to Kaya was so good! I hope to maybe read more of this one day!

Just wanted to leave a comment to say that I really enjoyed everything you have written so far for this fan fiction. Everything has been well thought out and detailed. My only complaint is that the time jumps in the beginning were just confusing. I hope you are well and can continue writting!

i need more chapters

I love reading this story, the characters have so much dynamics, especially hoku. Theres not a lot of stories with reluctant protagonists. I hope more is yet to come!

I dont know how many times I have reread this story. I love everything about it. I look forward to reading it many more times, and i hope more is yet to come!

I confess my love for this fanfic

So are you telling me Hoku's dad was a gay and her mother had a lover? And you're telling they were just best friends who had a child? I love this

The albatross is back

I love Hoku being happy

I love this so much, I kinda want an AU where Hoku does go with Mihawk. It seems kind of fun

this is one of my favorite fics to sit cozy on the couch and re-read. any of your works really, brings me a lot of joy all these years later. keeping up with the manga, sometime my mind thinks of what hoku would do in those scenarios. hope you're doing well! 3

Oh wow... wooooooow
Every moment i could spare the last few days were spent reading your story. And i barely tear myself from my phone

Your writing style is absolutely captivating! Every word and sentence flows so nicely and keeps the reader hooked.

I know the last update has been quite a while but i hope you will find the time and inspiration to continue Hoku's story. Because i am seriously invested here xD

Thank you for writing this gorgeous piece

Great chapter! I love Shanks and Hoku so much and I am definitely shipping them once she is older physically! i would love to see excerpts of his and Mihawks reactions to news of Luffy and Hoku