Reviews for Son of the dragon gods |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I agree. Issei is a dragon, so just do dragon powers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whelp. Bakakiel is a dead man. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Those idiots are def gonna be fucked by issei |
![]() ![]() ![]() Barkiel is about to die. HAHAHAHA |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not to worry ?! The conversation is good But be careful about the story some people's will not understand they idea itself . But a good one about Akeno I was thinking you will put Rias but it works . Plus : Put Issei with a sacred gear , will be a some ?! And I read a story from wattpad wath is cooled "Apocalypse Dragon God emperor" and in that story was something wicke it my bee a good a idea, is cooled "Lost gears" how with you like to make a story about those . And don't try to make issei very weich . And went it comes the time about Shalba to come to capture him make hi 2 sacred gears active and make him beat him(Shalba) and the athers very isei but don't make them take Orphies , Great Red, iseei. And good luck with this volume ?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. Love your story |
![]() ![]() I thought it was very good, I'll be waiting on the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Î like wen it began and the middle bat wen it began the capture with shalba it started to feel very bad . I'm sorry to say baut you have to make shalba lose this fight it will make the story even more interesting . Truste me !? It will make even more good . Plus: could you make a story about "Lost gears " it will make a great story . And one about "Transcend beains". PLLLLLLSSSSSSSS |
![]() ![]() dont kidnap issei dude make it a happy one |
![]() ![]() This is really good so far, keep it up :))) |
![]() ![]() I love all those Storys with Issei as GR's son. Your story is also good, so I look forward to Mode. - |
![]() ![]() Interesting start! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so nice to read a new chapter to this story it has been a very good read so seals on him so that is to keep him weak so he can get in trouble? so we will see |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad good so far you should also post tgis at webnovel if you want a greater reach for your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay nice second chapter, always love emotional Ophis more than bland and nothing. Also I say this the Old-Satans are dead, I know they are prideful and stupid, but this idea will be their end. Had they thought of using Samael or a Dragon Slayer , maybe 1% success. Now they will piss of two Dragon Gods and mostlikely die. Cant wait for more |