I love explosions.

Good start.

Finish this fight first

Merry Christmas to you. Why should you care if your readers are unhappy if there is some time between updates? We should be happy you update at all.

are you stupid or something issei could have just called Baraqiel to ask if they are rogues not only that i never liked that shes willing to throw asias life away regardless it seemed all she was waiting for was for her to die and bring her back as a devil

I can't wait for the next chapter

hmmm don't make KDA suddenly appears in Kyoto in future... ok?

Awesome update. Love your story.

Very inspirational.

I don't play League of Legends. I thought he was some random miscreant from the Egyptian Pantheon.

Not sure if i mentioned this in an earlier review but could you please not switch from third person to first person pov? It's extremely jarring from a reader's standpoint. If you're going to write from either first or third person, stick to one or the otherbe consistent.

I finally found this story again. I have been looking for 2 years after I found it on YouTube one day, and I loved it, but then it suddenly disappeared. and now I found the author. you are an awesome wrighter

I can't wait for the fight to start. It's looks like it will be great.

Ew, you've somehow taken unlikable characters and made them worse. Ophis is some yapping bimbo now too, because of course we can never have enough one dimensional characters.

ok.. following your train of thought Rizevim is the first grandchild then does that then make Vali the first great-grandchild (son)?

I've enjoyed the story thus far. Not sure if I am correct on the dates but it looks like the last time you have written into this story is about 4-5 year ago? are you going to continue?