Reviews for The Last Son
CaitlinMF chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
Wow. Just stumbled upon this, and holy f*ckin' hell...

That was amazing. Great work, great work.
knbnnate chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Chilling. Good stuff :-)
martharowe chapter 1 . 4/27/2003
Interesting story. Great description, very eerie...

One suggestion: descent upwards ascent

But overall, great!
Midnight Driad chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
I really liked it. Very dark though. And creepy. It is hard to think that Clark would do all that. For future chapter (if any) you could make it so he remembers killing some of the people at different places.
Niggle chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
Holy. Fuck.
LaCasta chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
Wow! Compelling and told with a great sense of timing-I could see it coming just far enough ahead but not too far.

Pete's death was particularly compelling and well-done, the gesture that Clark doesn't understand took on such poignance.

Great job.
deanine chapter 1 . 4/25/2003
Absolutly chilling. The descriptions paint a vivid if horrible picture. It ends in such absolute despair and death, both for humanity and inside of Clark.

I love it!