|Reviews for Pineapple|
| wearedeadpool chapter 1 . 5/4
| Tomlaz chapter 1 . 4/17
Great story. at first I thought it was going to have some nice lancaster in it though
| Rotten Sarcophagus chapter 1 . 1/22
| Fyr RedNight chapter 1 . 1/1
I discovered this story through DAM1994's, and I very much liked this story's concept.
It was a great turnaround of the Jaune fails Initiation trope.
The ending was marvelous! I swear I had shivers when I read Jaune's last line. And now I'm left wondering what happens to everyone from this point!
Anyhow, this journey was amazing.
Thanks for sharing this with us!
| hijoton chapter 1 . 12/25/2021
Remarkable storytelling and a great premise.
| Casual One chapter 1 . 12/7/2021
| Marshman101 chapter 1 . 11/9/2021
That was amazing, and I loved all of it.
| Nofear4231 chapter 1 . 11/8/2021
Plz make more of this its Awesome
| ExGrim chapter 1 . 10/29/2021
Beautifully written and despite being short it manages to feel complete. In so short a time you get to see an anxious, unskilled teenage boy grow into a confident, talented young man. Well done.
| kootranova1 chapter 1 . 10/22/2021
Fucking amazing. Could make a short film out of this.
| Luka chapter 1 . 10/9/2021
Incredible story, was a really fun read. Haven’t seen anything like this in pretty much any fanfic community. Hope you continue writing on this site.
| Mmjohns chapter 1 . 9/25/2021
This was great I would love it were there to be a second part
| Rakkis3059 chapter 1 . 9/16/2021
This was amazing. Saw some one link it on Tumblr. Such a fun read. May favorite parts was Winter's letter to Weis.
| Just an IsekaI writer chapter 1 . 9/11/2021
sob... this is manly tears...
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2021
I love it might be my new favorite 1 shot