Reviews for Once More, With Feeling
Flancy chapter 1 . 2/21/2019
Oho, this is indeed a bit more well-rounded so far! Thank you for the new chapter!
Spitfire The Wounded chapter 1 . 2/21/2019
Okay. I will admit. I like this one more.
MidnightWriter44678 chapter 1 . 2/20/2019
This is already turning out better than Out of Hand, not to say the original was bad, but it is clear that you have grown and improved your writing style significantly, so well done. I cant wait to see where this adventure leads and what kind of trials Jim and the gang (both old and new) will be sent through!
LetTheChaosEnsue chapter 1 . 2/20/2019
I agree, I do like this. Even if Jim didn't get to hear his mothers heart break, which was good angst in the last one.
Glad you started up again so soon!
My offer still stands if you want any advice.
Amazing job!
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