Excellent. I couldn’t stop reading. But what happens next?

Loving Ensign Ames and the exploration of her life, her dreams and fears as well as her ambitions. I'm intrigued as to what has happened to her, I certainly hope she isn't dead, that would be a bummer.

Hope there's more to come.

Wow, a lot of detail and suspension. I love how you describe Amens' friends and brother and their relationships. I am really curious how it will go on.

Sorry for the late review. I have been so busy lately... with depression -.-

I love your story. I love your details & writing style. I like the character of T'Gai, but I doubt she will make another appearance? Keep writing!

Ah! It's so frustrating when a chapter ends, when there is so much more I want to know.
Eagerly waiting on your next chapter

Very good and well written!

Very interesting story. I wonder how her brother reacted when she gets to have a symbiosis ? In the first chapter, she seemed very lonely.
She is in a weird coma ?

Oh! Please tell me she's not dead.
Maybe, she'll be save by Romulan or spy romulan ? Like i would be cool to have romulans characters like Garak... I love spy stories and Romulan.
She's an interesting characters, not confident like Jadzia Dax

Really well written, with an easy start, an intense cliffhanger to a surreal continuation.
Looking forward to where you are going with this

*claps in Breen*