Reviews for Hard Knock Life
Vaccant Account chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Hey! I hope you come back soon! And maybe write those stories you have now your profiles but after you finish "Change of Heart"
carrie chapter 16 . 2/10/2004
Good ending story for your Jamie Saga. Poor girl, kept getting herself in with the wrong people, but that tends to happen with abuse cases. You did a great job. Hope to see more stories soon.
Tigra Kat and Risika chapter 16 . 7/6/2003
::waving the plane off::

Tigra: THat girl damn well better have learned her lesson. Or i won't so generous to help her next time.

Kat: Tell me about it.

Risika: But that laser tag game was fun.

FLASHBAK TO THE GAME

Tigra: ::shooting at Travis:: Hold still you asshole. ::shoots:: damn it! he turned at the last second! I alsmot had him in the head!

Kat: ::shots:: I GOT HIS LEG!

Risika: ::shoots a few shots. a few miss but one gets him:: I got his shoulder blade!

Tigra: ::shoots again:: BOO YEAH! I got both his feet.

::Goten shoots him in the back and Travis goes into a store::

Tigra, Kat, and Risika: DAMN IT! COWARD!

END FLASHBACK

Tigra: ::sigh:: that was fun.

Kat: Why let end there. the ass is still alive.

::silence::

Risika: Lets go.

::they leave::

::few hour later. Travis's house is on fire::

Tigra: Now that makes me feel better.

Kat: say hi to mr. tightly for us you asshole.

Risika: yep. that round two of laser tag was funner than the last game.

Tigra: I agree. And kat good idea with burning his dead body with the house. no one will suspect us.

Kat: Gracias.

::the three smile as the house burns to the ground::

~great story!~
Valkyrie4 chapter 16 . 7/6/2003
_ I like happy endings, especially ones that leave an opening for another sequal _-

Maylar: Happy endings are ok, i just wish they had killed Travis.

Val: Yeah, that would have been a bonus. Oh well, we cant have everything. I really enjoyed this fic. Hope to see more soon!
chico chapter 16 . 7/5/2003
COL! : ) i luved that fic
FallenTears84 chapter 16 . 7/4/2003
Great Chapter and Great Story. It would be interesting to see how you would include Jamie in another story. Maybe in that one she'd be more smarter then she was in the others and this one. Let's face it! She wasn't smart! Anyway, great job
Crecy chapter 16 . 7/4/2003
Crecy: Aw... We shoulda kept him around a little longer. I'm bored.

Maia: Yep. But at least we know he can't reprodose. One of him is enough in this world.

Chirusa: But I'm bored! Maybe we should find him.

Asper: I think you guys better not. He's in a... whiter place now.

Crecy:Whiter?

Cado: *Laughs* Yep! Nice white jacket, white, padded walls, white doors and hallways.

Maia, Chirusa, and Crecy: *laughs histariclly*

Maia: *whips tears from her eyes* He- he- he ACUTUALLY told someone? WHat an idiot!

Chirusa: I thought even HE was smart enough not tell someone that people who can shoot 'fire balls' and can fly abducted him!

Crecy: I guess that tells you that he's even dumber then he looks!

Chirusa: At least Jamie is going to TRY not to get into these situations again. If not then we could aways pound some sense into her!

Crecy: Uh huh. Great story Cheena! We sure liked it a lot! _
N-sama chapter 16 . 7/4/2003
_ What a great ending! Good job and another fic finished! _
chico chapter 15 . 7/4/2003
::has evil smirk on face::

I LUV LASTER TAG! : P

oww man i can belive it is the end next chapter :(
Valkyrie4 chapter 15 . 7/4/2003
Damn motherf*cker! That was mean! Thats like the worse thing you can do to a guy, destroy his car!

Maylar: Well, he shouldnt have called Cheena a bitch.

Val: Damn straight! Now arent you glad you didnt say that?

Maylar: Oh yes! Im VERY glad i didnt say that.

Val: Anyway, I WANNA PLAY TOO! FRY HIS ASS! Hope the next chapter's up soon! _
Tigra Kat and Risika chapter 15 . 7/3/2003
Tigra: Hm that laser tag game sounds fun.

Risika: Sure does.

Kat: I think she should have killed him.

Risika: True. But i bet that laser tag game will do it.

Tigra: Not if i beat them to it first: ::takes off after Travis::

Kat: HEY MORRON! WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU GOING!

Tigra: I was having a good time until him and Jamie showed up. I can forgive Jamie cause the girl isn't the brightess person but that jackass is the one who did it. ITS GO TIME BABY!

Risika: ::turns to Kat::i dunno about you. But I'm gonna follow her, help her out, or help cheena and goten play laser tage. Which ever one comes first or maybe even both.

Kat: Damn girl, you think I'm gonna stay here?

::both go after Tigra::

~update soon~
FallenTears84 chapter 15 . 7/3/2003
Great Chapter! Yall better of blasted that ass off the earth! How did the game go? I gotta know! Update soon! This was a great chapter! You really made me laugh in this one!
Crecy chapter 15 . 7/3/2003
Travis: *unconsions on the floor with the jumper cables still attached*

Chirusa: *Shuts off the car* Damn, He's no fun any more.

Maia: It was my turn next! I wanted to hurt him too!

Crecy: I'll wake him up. *Takes bucket of water and throws it on him*

Travis: *wakes up*

Maia: YAY! Now what am I gonna do?

Crecy: I donno.

Asper: I'm suprised that he lasted as long as he did.

Cado: No kidding.

Maia: I know! *grins, then walks over to him*

Crecy: *confused look* What are you going to do?

Maia: You'll see. *powers up ki blast and sends to where the sun don;t shine*

Asper and Cado: *wide eyes*

Crecy: Sweet! No he'll never get laid!

Cado: Wow. That's a guys worst nightmare.

Asper: *shakes head* HE DOES deseave it.

Chirusa: I think we should let him go now. Living with that is worst then dying now wnyway.

Crecy:I agree. Buh bye!

Maia: That was fun! And he got what he should have.

Crecy: Yep! BTW, great chapter! _
N-sama chapter 15 . 7/3/2003
YEAH! No more Travis! YEAH! _ UPDATE SOON! GREAT CHAPTER!
chico chapter 14 . 7/1/2003
YOU DO HAVE TO GET HIM! other wise i will he REALLY pisses me off,i cant wait to see what hapens now though
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