|Reviews for The PureBlood Princes|
| MCH chapter 3 . 3/6
the last line says it all. Riding Sirius round my study, I hear Severus's oh god what have I done in there, I got them two in my life.
| hisnhers chapter 3 . 11/12/2020
Loved this. I really like SevitisSeveritis fics. The way Hadrian adores Severus was wonderful.
Lucius as a good guy was fantastic.
I liked the ending a lot. Especially, Hadrian remembering Sirius and Remus.
| sunsethill chapter 3 . 10/3/2020
I love that Harry remembers them. You did set this up well with him remembering Severus earlier. Since you gave us a vision of the future in the beginning, we can trust that Lucius and Alexander and the goblins are making sure things come out right and I feel this is a satisfying end to the story, although I always can enjoy more if the author wants to give it.
| sunsethill chapter 2 . 10/3/2020
Lots happened in a small space of time. I see you like this idea of the maternal and paternal repudiation to hide identity as it was in the previous story I read, so I'm going to make some suggestions. First, a small nit pic, but it was a little jarring. You reversed the maternal and paternal aspects in the giving of the first potions. You had James's characteristics being removed with the "maternal" potion and Lily's with the "paternal". I'm really not clear how there would be anything left of Harry if you remove both before adding in the new components. If you had just said magic, then it might fly, but you said ancestries and magics. What is left, especially since you are describing physical characteristics changing? I think you may need to come up with different words to explain what you have in your mind. It also appears now that he does not have a mother, so how does the DNA work for that? People need two parents. Is that what you mean by the booster for the blood adoption-in effect Severus became father and mother? I'm sure you've thought of these issues, but the specifics aren't clear to me and that takes me out of the story as I'm reading. The relationship of Severus and Harry is already sweet. Will we learn why little Harry recognized Severus at first. And I assume we are to blame Lady Magic for Hadrian now recognizing Severus as his Papa?
| sunsethill chapter 1 . 10/3/2020
I like the use of Selene Lovegood here and the choices set before Lucius and Severus. They have received enough information to know the areas they need to avoid.
| Trixia Oliver chapter 3 . 8/31/2020
Ei, curti bastante a trama da história. Gostaria de ver ela desenvolvida *-*
| HoneyBear84 chapter 3 . 4/2/2020
Love it and seriously wish it was longer
| HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 3 . 2/26/2020
Enjoyed it and wish it was longer.
| gabzep chapter 3 . 2/1/2020
I’m so glad Sirius and Remus with still be in Harry’s life!
| Woohehe chapter 3 . 1/21/2020
Really fun read! Would love more in this universe but also think you left it at an optimistic stopping point. Thanks for sharing!
| Wynni chapter 3 . 12/30/2019
I approve! Have you done Luce's adventure, yet?
| Anna Doherty chapter 1 . 8/10/2019
A very well written story and a very enjoyable read. Anna
| Calmzone1 chapter 3 . 7/14/2019
Lol. Great start. Lovely story.
So, did they ever figure out how Harry knew Tev’rus? Or Pa’foo and woofy remmy?
I would like be to see what happens with this in the future. I’m assuming Hadrian is friends with Draco. Is he in the same year as the others? I’m hoping you do a continuation on this timeline.
Poor Dumbledore when no one shows up for the stone.
| Calmzone1 chapter 2 . 7/14/2019
Very fascinating. Don’t know if anyone commented yet, but most likely. You have reversed maternal and paternal removals for James and Lily. If you are doing edits, just switch the letters P and M and you’re good to go. There are also a few missing words here and there, but that was probably FF, as it happens to a lot of people.
Very interesting story though.
| Fallow55 chapter 3 . 6/29/2019
xxxx KUDOS xxxx : )