Ok, well you did it, you made it convincing.

I still feel that the Kakashi confession scene could do with a little less "are you fucking crazy" reaction from Sakura as though him loving her or there being love between them was a nonsense idea. There is just something not vibing with that scene and all of their interactions that came before it.

I think my other issue with Kakashi confessing his feelings and then having Sakura react in such a way that makes me think she had absolutely no intention of seeing him as anything other than barely friends-with-benefits situation is that now that she knows how he feels...it is going to feel like any feelings she develops are forced or at the very least influenced by knowing that he wants her to feel that way.

They won't feel genuine is what I am trying to say. Unless you manage to write them in such a way where she realizes she did actually have deeper feelings for him the whole time and was just being dumb.

I don't want Kakashi to end up hurt here...

Hmm, a bit disappointing that she...just viewed him as a piece of pretty ass the whole time? That is how this kind of comes across, like she is completely blindsided by the idea of having deeper feelings for him...when before, that isn't how it really read. It read like she had developed deeper feelings for him...I don't know, just seems weird that she is so shocked by the entire idea.

And...for him to have to wait around for her TO develop those feelings...doesn't seem fair to him. But I will keep reading to see what happens...

I did read this story some years ago and I AM SO HAPPY that I found it again.
I always wanted to say that I LOVE how you wrote this story and I am happy to start from the beginning and reread all the chapters, you did such a good job I REALLY love you for writing such a good kakasaku fic, I will never forget it.

love it!

This is definitely now one of my favorite KakaSaku fic! Genoiusly-well-written, binge-reading, emotional rollercoaster every chapter!

And the rainbow after the storm is finally here

Sasuke

I knew the previous chapters were the calm before the storm. And the storm has finally arrived.

Everytime I read something about a well-explained a jutsu or a seal while incorporating science, medical science, makes me think how genius the writer is. The time and effort done to research just to give and justify the run-thru of the plot is beyond words. Like seriously, you make one genius writer (to the Author of this story).

I'm loving every bits and pieces of every chapter! Makes me fall in love with KakaSaku over again!

The author has a way on making the readers' emotional! This chapter again is making me cry!

I'm starting to fall in love with this story.

This chapter is making me emotional.

Them seating altogether in the light of night sky makes me emotional. I feel Sasuke's melancholy.