|Reviews for Ballad For Jack And Jane|
| Bee-327 chapter 2 . 3/3
I too, have troubles with endings sometimes. It might have been cliche, but I loved the ending. Very good job! xx
| Phantom Actress chapter 2 . 3/3
I get it! I have a hard time with endings too because of writer's block.
But I really liked this!
| ChibiDawn23 chapter 2 . 3/3
Don't ever apologize for a creative choice :) that's why it's called fanFICTION.
Awwwe gosh darn it, Jack's being all adorable, giving Jane time and being all gentlemanly and such.
| Loveispatientloveiskind chapter 2 . 3/3
I love this story
| DSCWin chapter 2 . 3/3
The ending was good. I'm happy Jack's giving Jane time to love again. That's heart breaking what Jane had gone through.
| Phantom Actress chapter 1 . 2/28
I loved the ending! It was so sweet! You are an amazing writer!
| ChibiDawn23 chapter 1 . 2/27
I adored Jack asking permission and Michael telling him that Jane's not his to give :)
I can't wait to see the proposal!
| Bee-327 chapter 1 . 2/27
It was adorable to see Michael be protective over his sister. It's a great story, I love it. xx
| Loveispatientloveiskind chapter 1 . 2/27
This is a beaufiul story so far. I love it
| DSCWin chapter 1 . 2/27
Awe such a good story. I hope we get a continuation as to Jane's answer. I hope you write a second chapter or story!