“The flight from death.” BEAUTIFUL. I’m moved beyond all words. This story is jaw dropping and BEAUTIFUL!

Great. Simply great. The storytelling is amazing, thiugh there are some few, but ignorable grammar and soelling errors.

Second time reading this
In summary, Taylor is a b*tch and us hard to read since her pov is always extremely self assured... But that is pretty much canon. i Dropped worm for that reason, hard to read her pov for ao much.

Anyways the story is good and Taylor is pretty much accurate . Only negative is that half of the stuff she gets away with only works because other characters let it happen. She kills someone and just say no i didn't, then gets away with it. Made sense when defending herself from bullies but I feel when bodies start dropping it would have been nice to see some real push back . Instead everything goes back to normal for a while until the next small group she needs to kill.

Absolutely fantastic, solid couple of days of reading.

You got the exchange rate backwards in this chapter.

"A few rednecks with rifles wouldn't be able to stand up to tanks and planes." Tell that to the Vietnamese, those in the Middle East, etc.

Is Taylor intentionally using an incorrect name for Millicent, or is she just callous enough to not care? Either way, it's strange after how upset she was when she thought she'd died.

I'm honestly very disappointed Taylor hasn't taken up her exercise routine again. I know she explained why she didn't, but she definitely could have found a way, and it was one of my favorite parts of her as a character.

So, Ron's pregnant with Taylor's wasp babies? That's kinda hilarious.

This book is full of grammar mistakes, that it irritates me that I can't continuously comment on your failures, like I do to authors on WebNovel. Just this chapter and the others before and I'm expecting more of this level of failure going forward.

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Unless Taylor is going to a beach in China, the fallout won’t come anywhere near her. Nuclear fallout usually doesn’t travel more than 300 miles from ground zero, even in a worst case scenario.

Autocorrect seems to have crept into your chapter, turning Avada Kedavra into Davao Kendra.

Taylor actually has a pretty good way to get Bones on her side, even if Skeeter did tell on her - just tell Bones that when her family was attacked, and her parents murdered, one of the attackers did something to her that awoke memories of a past life. The Wizarding World doesn’t think or suspect souls exist, they KNOW souls exist.

Wards and Protectorate aren’t quite normal law enforcement, but they’re close enough that Bones would likely see Taylor’s memories as being from a fellow cop.

Moody is quite the hypocrite. If someone came after him to murder him, and the only way to survive was to kill them first, he’d do so without hesitation, and be completely unrepentant afterwards. Every auror would do the same. He probably has killed quite a few people over his career, and I expect quite a few aurors have killed people too.

What police in British-derived legal systems always seem to forget though, is that they have the right to kill in self defense because they are citizens, and every citizen has that right, not because they are police. Sure, the more restrictive governments prefer that you not kill people, and will scrutinize anyone who does and claims self defense quite thoroughly… but ultimately citizens DO have that right.