A very enjoyable story.

There's definitely cigarettes and a broom in those packages.

Coeur,

Fuck you and your omake. The hairlines in Hunter x Hunter makes Jaune's hair look decent.

Damn it man! Stop making me want to actually read a Jaune/Willow fic from you!

Every time Raven shows up in this story I am highly amused. Sort of like whenever Neo shows up.

Probably already been told seeing as how long ago this was made, but Raven didn't save Yang in the battle for beacon in this story.. I feel this mistake was made in an earlier chapter too, where you accidentally mixed up what Raven did in this story with what happened in Not this time fate.

You know... I wonder how the whole 3 questions a century thing actually works? Like does the 100 years have a specific date to them and if the questions aren't used up before then they are lost? Does the 100 years only start counting after the first question is asked? Or is it after the last question is asked?

Random thought, but damn do I want to see Neo with Maiden powers. The poor bastards who tried getting in her way would have such a terrible time.

lol... Raven is a sassy bitch when hung over it seems. I like it.

Honestly between Cinder's plotting... err excuse me Jaune's plotting this chapter and what happened in Blonde Bard, I kinda want to see a Jaune/Willow story from you. The sheer insanity a story with that pairing would bring especially with you writing it would be hilarious I'm sure.

Weiss might have a mental breakdown if Jaune became her new stepfather though.

I almost want Yuma and/or Trifa to immediately tell where the White Fang's camp is just because I always love seeing Adam wrong. It's funny.

I'm with Cinder. Viva la revolution!

Having just finished the fic where Jaune runs the White Fang, it is nice to have Trifa mentioned. We all could use a bit more Trifa. She's cool... even if she makes no sense.

Holy Handgrenade! Kaboom!

wait not that i think about it, i genuinely deadass have a question, why the fuck didnt salem just wait humanity out? been alive for thousands of years, shes fought agaisnt ozpin and the four kingdoms for just as long and cause of it, hunters have always been strong, incredibly strong, and theres always been a need for them to be that strong, that being the grimm, my question is, why doesnt she just pull the grimm back? wait centuries, even millenia if needed, until hunters are just completely out of practice? say what you want but without a viable threat ozpin wouldnt be able to keep them around for that long, and the complacency would make the kingdoms weaker and there fore easier to conquer, sure it wouldve been frustrating but she literally been immortal and stated that she was willing to wait as long as needed for victory. if she did that then she wouldnt need to take down ozpin and his numerous allies, just wait them out until its JUST ozpin, doing it this way as well also allows her to spend 100% of her efforts on ckeeping humanity as divided as possible, nothing to the point of violence on the level of the white fang, but wnough so that oxpin can NEVER use the relics to summon the brother gods without risking them just wiping the slate clean, AND also divert some focus to keep tabs on and even recruit as many maidens as possible and then when huntsman are little more then fairy tales of the past, oxpin doesnt have a sufficiant fighting force, at least not one that can fight against her, and if shes smart, has the maidens on her side, she could either just launch a full frontal assault on the vaults with the maidens, or stralthily sneak the maidens into positions of power that gives them access to said vaults, she could easily just get in and out, summon the gods, and die in a very wfficient matter, or am i wrong?

stg im ginna start skipping chapters till i get to the part where they make up