Reviews for Toku no Hero Academia (Discontinued and Remade) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() soo this fanfic is not my cup of tea. gomeern! even if the premise is good, yet if they didn't take the world building that the original have... then ba-bye HAHAHHA |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am really sorry to those fanfic who decided that all might will give one for all to izuku as his secondary quirk... haaaysss the manga already debunked that from happening. wherein if the vessel already has a quirk he/she will have a lower lifespan, that's why all of the past vessel died young because not only did all for one killl them but even if they go on a hiding and just train their quirks. they will still only kill themselves much faster... |
![]() ![]() ![]() to explain why he isn't updating he got Corona he went to the wedding and he had college stuff but know he has back and doing his ruby fanfic the hdxd then returning to this story go to his second story and in the news uptake he explain everything |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great first chapter! I write too and know that the favorite things that people like to comment are hate messages, but look where you are now! I like that your adding himiko, so did I. I'm not sure about came but nejire Is a solid choice. I actually didn't add ochako in the fic I'm currently writing, however I'll make up for that with other fics. |
![]() ![]() ![]() if you are copying your scenes from other author, atleast correct the mistakes they have made. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If Bakugo is near Midoriya, how can this be in alphabetical order |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've seen 2 updates to this story and there haven't been any new chapters for a while... why is it updating then? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah I actually like how you wrote and the quirk seemed interesting in how it could have been applied, but the harem is a no for me. I mean when a harem is bigger than 3 or 4, it becomes too much and moronic, because obviously the MC can't spend enough time with his girls and at that point there is barely any character and relationship development. What do you actually think that after one fucks his girl than he has a stable relationship? It's bullshit, I mean with 9 girls he can see one a day every week counting also training and school, how is that supposed to be a healthy relationship, why would the girls even agree, and don't tell me there aren't other kind hearted boys around WTF. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this whole chapter was gay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() After all this thing. Technique based on Tokusatsu, in the end, he still became Fucking Deku shit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so when your going to include the movies in this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Harem" And you ruined it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Any chance that you might use some of the moves from SSSS Gridman? (A tokusatsu anime with major influencing from the Ultra series that was created by the legendary Studio Trigger.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I almost busted a rib and passed out from laughing so hard from the omake. Somebody should totally write a fanfiction where right as to go to reveal the hero names, Izuku reveals that he's the traitor by declaring himself a villain. I would do it but I'm not a good writer, you're story totally gave me that idea so thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story |