The fact that you're developing Mineta's character is something amazing, you don't see that often. Izuku not caring about Katsuki is really refreshing, let's see if you have something planned for him later on. Now, you see, when you call someone by "sama" they're usually putting the person on a pedestal while lowering themselves. it makes a lot of sense if the story is a high-fantasy one like One-Piece or Naruto but MHA universe is basically modern Japan with quirks so it doesn't sound natural.

The fact that you're developing Mineta's character is something amazing, you don't see that often. Izuku not caring about Katsuki is really refreshing, let's see if you have something planned for him later on. Now, you see, when you call someone by "sama" they're usually putting the person on a pedestal while lowering themselves. it makes a lot of sense if the story is a high-fantasy one like One-Piece or Naruto but MHA universe is basically modern Japan with quirks so it doesn't sound natural.

I really enjoyed this chapter but there are some stuff that I need to talk about. First, Momo-San and Izuku-San is just wrong, I'm too lazy to explain why though but that's basically butchering japanese. Second, I don't understand why the MC reacts so dramatically over not passing the test, it's not as if UA is the only way to become a hero. That wouldn't make a lot of sense. Third, I noticed you're a little arrogant when it comes to your fic, I understand that this is your creation and all but posting it online and refusing to get any sort of negative reaction is just amateurish in my opinion. The story is pretty good so far, let's see what happens next.

hmm, the first chapter was ok I guess. I'll need to read more to form my opinion.

I come back every now and then just so I can read this again, very awesome story!

this fic really reminds me of another i just read. i think it was one where Deku ate a devil fruit. Just so many similarities between them outside source material really to the point i had to make sure you didnt write that one

disculpa una pregunta como se llama el quirk de izuku

point loss is complete bullshit btw, it does nothing for the story other than force Izuku to think he failed like the original. idk why it's necessary to force that to happen. you don't need to force the train back on the first track when it has already switched over to track 2.

also did he do more workouts in the ten months before the entrance exam? the reason I ask is that Izuku should be at least as fit at the start of the training than he was at the end of the original (if not more). you mentioned him training throughout his life in order to not rely on his quirk, that would make him fit.

Constructive criticism: You need to re-evaluate how four year olds think and speak. Because you've fallen into a trap known as "character microphone syndrome", where you use a character to speak your own opinions in your own way, making them sound way more sophisticated, or what you think is sophisticated anyways. A four year old, without an intelligence quirk of some sort, or maaaaaybe Iida, will not be speaking this way.

I apologize if I come across as rude with this, but it is one of the most often used negative tropes in fanfiction, and if I can point it out to even one writer than that's good.

Personally I think one of the limitations is if he pushes it too far after using up all his energy he risks putting himself into a coma. Though with the addition of the almost unlimited energy well that is OFA he won’t run out of any anytime soon.

Dude, when are you gonna update this fanfic! I wanna know what happens next!

Hope you update soon. This a good fic and I like the character progression for Bakugo, too many people just leave him as the "asshole evil idc what happened to deku" kind of Bakugo, but ya Gabe him soon good development. Over all good fic

Why don't you have no older girls in the harem like Midnight or ?

Loving the story but the name of his power is kind of dumb.