|Reviews for The Nightmare|
| 456amfan chapter 1 . 3/23/2019
I really liked this story as well, it made me feel all cozy inside reading it! The main critique I have for you in your writing (not meant as an insult, I just want to help you develop it to your full potential:)) is to not worry to much up over description or explaining all details of a particular thing and person all at once. I really love the tenderness you portrayed amongst the family. Also the nose touch-very cute. Keep writing, it's wonderful!