Reviews for A Gamers Multiverse Adventures |
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erozoth chapter 7 . 7/19 I understand this is the first story, and like the MC said it is so boring. Also, evil? Yes, but dumb evil. Its the type of evil only authors write for the sake of calling it an evil mc and not because it has any... reasoning, it didn't develop. Somehow authors think character growth is needed when the MC is stupid and needs to become capable but going to evil is just a switch and done. Maybe the next world will be better but I don't see how that will happen, he is already off the deep end, mainly due to all the perks. Honestly, I tried this after reading the celestial remnant and I liked how despite being OP its still interesting. |
Havenone2324 chapter 2 . 6/28 Please do the old republic i wanna see him fu k shit up lol |
Dekiru Grindelwald chapter 2 . 3/28 I hope MC is not a faggot who's interested in little boys |
Guest chapter 22 . 2/18 Sit Down." I say, putting some power behind my voice as she is forced to obey, glaring slightly. "So, you have two choices, obey or die. I really don't care which, you aren't that interesting after all." I say casually walking up to her and taking her Nun I want to see Shiro eis reaction to that statement |
NaraSadow chapter 30 . 2/18 rip |
NaraSadow chapter 29 . 2/18 nice |
NaraSadow chapter 28 . 2/18 this is boring. why even bother calling out the lemons if it's 95% lemons and 5% plot? I'm glad you're revamping this. |
TheWritingFreakIsBack chapter 20 . 2/13 I love the duality of Shiro and the game fighting each other and helping each other at the same time "When does this happen you ass hat" 'go fuck yourself...a week from now' |
TheWritingFreakIsBack chapter 15 . 2/13 " *Trait added [Whiny Bitch] Fine, fine. Point taken. I'm sorry. *Trait removed [Whiny Bitch] " This is why i like this story |
TheWritingFreakIsBack chapter 12 . 2/11 The first time the game truly responded and its ...i forgor |
TheWritingFreakIsBack chapter 2 . 2/10 *kind of useless argument about to start* "Shiro Away!" [Greater Teleportation] Goofy as hell |
VamPyr00 chapter 10 . 10/31/2023 This has gotten completely out of hand. Time Manipulation, Reality Manipulation, and Life Creation/Alteration are just too much for any one person to control. I enjoy overpowered 'dark' main characters but this is just ridiculous. Not to mention that he has started 'rewarding' his harem members by having them fucked with tentacles and clones (soon to be Slimes too)! That's just weird as fuck dude. The lemon/lime scenes with the 'Aura of Normalcy' were also extremely weird. Why would you want to fuck someone that gives no feedback and ignores you? It literally goes against Shiro's own sadistic and prideful personality. Mind Manipulation was already pushing it on the lemon/lime scenes but having his harem members gangbanged by clones and tentacles really takes all the intimacy out of the scenes (same with 'Aura of Normalcy' really). He doesn't want other guys to fuck his girls...but he lets his clones and tentacles gangbang them? That makes no sense. Even IF he was getting feedback from them, it still wouldn't be the same as doing it himself. It just doesn't match Shiro's personality at all. |
VamPyr00 chapter 9 . 10/30/2023 He needs to make some more Eromancy spells instead of relying on summoned tentacles. I also really, REALLY hope his clones don't get involved in any sexual encounters. That almost ALWAYS seems like NTR and never turns out good. |
VamPyr00 chapter 8 . 10/30/2023 Hmm, I don't know how many hate/rape/non-con scenes you can make in a row without them getting a bit boring. I think the lemons/limes need a bit more variety. |
VamPyr00 chapter 5 . 10/27/2023 Why doesn't he just use Create Greater Item rather than Creation of All Things for such menial items? Also, why hasn't he created Eromancy skills or even a [Clean] spell yet? Honestly, I don't see this story being very exciting. You made the MC extrmely OP, equally lazy, and generally just boring. You've made his character an exaggerated immitation (caricature) of what an 'evil villain' should be and it gets pretty boring after a few chapters. The best evil villains should be cunning, ruthless, and unpredictable (i.e. Madara, Aizen, Joker, etc.). Meanwhile, your MC is boring, one dimensional, and extremely predictable. Shiro might be ruthless but it is more like the 'evil' of a petty lecherous thug than a true villain. He is basically like a horny teenager given the powers of a god and just running wild like an idiot. |