Reviews for After the Rain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() would you mind me adopting this story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter makes me want to try the new coca-cola classic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The officer stared at it, eyes wide and breathing labored, and with a jolt, Naofumi realized that this was not the shock of someone struggling to comprehend what they were seeing. "Officer," he said, keeping his voice as level as possible so as not to alarm her any further, "I don't know what the police department is so busy with, but this is extremely important. Is there anyone higher up I could speak to?" "Nii-san, did you just ask to speak to the manager?" — *Wheeze laughing slamming hand on desk gif insert here* it’s official, Naofumi is now a Karen |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, that;s too bad. I was really enjoying this story. I wish you the best of luck in the rewrite. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, other than a couple small nitpicks I don't really get why you wanted to do a full rewrite but hey, I really enjoyed this and if you think it needs to be redone better I'm all for seeing that happen. I'm definitely curious about your thoughts and decision on that front. Good to see you back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please post more, this is a really good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shame I really liked this story I'm going to follow it in hope that it gets rewritten and a chapter will be posted saying that the rewrite has started |
![]() ![]() ![]() AYO WTF?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great fic so far, I definitely hope you decide to continue it. :) |
![]() ![]() Please post more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to the next chapter cause this is getting pretty good |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's been over a year, when are you going to update the story? |
![]() ![]() You good dude? It's been quite a while. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The idea of the Shield Hero in our world and the others worlds problems following him is fascinating. |