I’m really enjoying the story so far!

Son of a B:ch, he's the silver surfer. You got me, well played.

Ok I know who izuku is about to become. I finally put all the pieces together

Well its been many years since your last update I'd love too see this continue

a huge part of me loves this story the only issue is the cliche lost limb on the mc but if stain kills Shigaraki or ateast causes a permanent lost of 2 limbs ill call it even

neat read. enjoyed the fight scenes and the story honestly had a lot of potential. only critique I can think of is the whole aging up thing not being really relevant or brought up again, but other then that great job! it's a shame this story will likely stay dead but I liked what was done with it regardless. very cool

You have 2 issues in this chapter, one that is from a misunderstanding, and 1 that is a fundamental flaw in canon that almost everyone makes.

Todoroki has a single quirk that gives him both Pyrokinesis and Cryokinesis, but also the resistance that goes with. He does *not* have 2 separate quirks. So Monoma copying Todorki would have both powers and both resistances.

Secondly, there is a massive flaw in the cavalry battle that means no one can win, let alone compete, except for Yanagi Reiko. Her quirk is telekinesis and she can control any object that weighs less than 150 pounds or so, and can control a stupidly large amount of them. That means if Reiko is on the field, all head bands immediately become hers. Even if they steal the headbands back, she can always take them because the headbands cannot be secured beyond wearing them on the head or neck.

I've literally read only a single fanfic that ever addresses this issue, and they used it in an interesting way to destroy all but 4 headbands so the points don't matter, because only by getting 1 of the 4 remaining headbands will any team move on.

You are the first person to ever attempt to explain the ridiculous super strength, speed, and durability some characters have in MHA. Is there a limit on how far it can go? Because otherwise the difference in strength between someone like Sato and a normal person is merely one of training.

No idea if this has been a thing yet, but I can't help but think that Izuku should just embed his feet in his board, to keep his balance and to keep in contact. Also, since he can manipulate the shape, is there anything stopping him from making what amounts to a monomolecular blade? Like, I can't help but picture him making something like a razor thin disk he can use to cut things, or needles to puncture things. A kind of lethal move, sure, but it can also be useful for rescue to cut or pierce things to remove rubble.

Also, can Izuku keep like, micro filament wires connected to his metal and use the filament to manipulate the metal remotely? Making the wire itself could be very useful as both a weapon and a restraining device as well.

He might also want to keep a thin layer of the metal on his feet as a replacement for shoes, that way he doesn't need to worry about removing his socks and shoes in a hurry. Either that, or specially designed shoes with little holes/channels to connect a thin thread through the shoe so he van stay fashionable while being able to ride his board.

Honestly I like what you did with stain. It is an interesting concept. I cant wait to see how Izuku reacts when he meets Stain when he's a villain.

keep up the good work

if the name situation hasn't been solved how about the name the protective hero defender based off the fact that silver surfer became a herald of Galactus to protect his planet and became a member of the defenders

One major problem I have with this book, and probably the ONLY problem I have, Thirteen is a woman, in both the manga AND anime. That's literally the only problem I can think of

NOOOOOOO! Goddammit... Worth it. This was a great story while it lasted.

This... is incredibly creative. I am genuinely impressed. The concept for this quirk isn't complicated. Which is great because all quirks in the series aren't complicated, so this fits. Some other mha fanfics? Some authors just gotta be weird for some reason. But it's VERY versatile. I can always appreciate versatility. This is great so far and I'm excited to see how you used this power.

More please