A 27 year old Kurenai crushing on a 12 year old Naruto is just weird. Forget the pedo angle for a minute and just think it through logically... What women is gonna crush on a little shrimp... This isn't some trashy hentai manger lmao.

Great story so far! Hope u can update soon!

This is a great story. It is extremely well written and entirely captivating. Please continue it. I got so lost in it I thought this had at least 10 chapters. Didn’t realize that it was only 5 until I finished it all in one sitting. You have a way with words that is incredible. Can’t wait to read more of it.

I hope you Finish this one day

huh I missed it on my other read throughs of this story but I just noticed you borrowed a move from Ruroni Kenshin as that punch you had Naruto use on Kimimaro was the Futae no Kiwami

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Keep this going!

Asuma is just as bad as Kaka-shi here. Ino dieting and he did nothing to get her out of her dumbass mentality. Course, that also means her parents are shits and want her to die also.

man can't wait for the next chapter

simplemente WOW QUEDE

When will you post a new chapter?

good

it's been almost a year. is this story dead?

please don't stop this story!

Good, up until leaving ANOTHER f*ing uchiha alive and then it fell apart. I have NO IDEA why so many authors feel the ABSOLUTE obsession to do this (a sister, gender flipped sasuke, mother, cousin, etc).. Just WIPE THEM OUT and be done with em'... They make VILLAIN characters... Not anything else.. Look back AS FAR AS THE CLAN existed.. If you can only get your "ultimate pump up" by HARVESTING YOUR SIBLINGS' EYEBALLS, it is KINDA OBVIOUS that these are NOT "good people". I dunno how this is so TOUGH to comprehend.

And sasuke a "decent guy"? How do you come to this conclusion? He NEVER SPOKE... He mainly just GRUNTED at everyone.. He did NOT have much of a personality UNTIL he became a complete asshole. I know they were TRYING for that whole "stoic, silent type, that lets actions speak louder then words".. But there was no payoff to that.. He went to ASSHAT territory before he got established as "silent".. He was just SO POORLY created. He was MILDLY antagonistic and a little cowardly (the giving up of the scroll in the forest, but only a "little" cowardly because of the Haku fight where he saved his teamate) to COMPLETE WHINY baby, that SHOULD NEVER HAVE BEEN ALLOWED TO BE A NINJA... There was no transition. (kinda like Obitdo... And if these are the "good ones" that can flip on a dime? WHY WOULD YOU WANT MORE of these pieces of crap living?)

How do the ANBU "struggle with the Sound Four"? They each got beaten by a GENIN! For that matter how are there so MANY jounin in the attacking forces? Is every village on the planet just SO MUCH BETTER at training their people then the leaf? Each one of these "jounin" that seem to be thick as fleas represents DECADES and DECADES of training... I get that you want "legions of tough bad guys" to get thrown into the "chosen one paper shredder"... But this is a bit much. It really makes the leaf look MORE incompetent. (they KNEW the invasion was happening, when it was going to happen, how it was going to happen, they had naruto taking care of MOST of the forces before they even got to the village, plus taking out the invasion's "big gun" and they STILL were overwhelmed SOMEHOW.. That's just FRIGHTENINGLY bad and stupid on their part)