Sounds like some 14 year old white kid needs to shut the fuck up and learn to grow up.

You ate still a fucking pedophile and you turned alot of the female adults in this shit show you call a story into pedophiles

Are You alive?

Never understood that reason for not telling Naruto about his parents. He is the F-ing Jinjuriki of the nine-tailed fox he is already wanted dead so he can't become strong or kidnapped to turn into a weapon. Hell Naruto never tells anyone about the Kyuubi why would he tell anyone about his parents.

continue this story please

from his shouting I'm just imagining him using the thuum lol

This is some good stuff hope you put out another chapter

If surrounded by Shadow clones in a dome like formation and have them use that new technique combo in intervals... or 3 lines formation with the 1st line shouts then backs off and letting the 2nd line forward and do another set of shouts and back off leading the 3rd line forward then rinse & repeat.

Sigh, you made me remember a fic with kid/younger Naruto that got trapped in a bubble/barrier where he trained, expanded the area, and recreated scenarios since he couldn't escape. I think it was a one-shot story with 2 chapters then.

Update please

Can't lie dick move not finishing the fan fiction its been 4 years I get it it takes a while to finish a chapter I really do but did you really have to finish the so called story as a cliffhanger like damn

Uhhh, restoring your hymen doesn’t make you a virgin. I assume you mean it’s to trick a man into thinking she has any value as a woman.

Hitomi died in childbirth so don't know why you have her alive here

You might want to change the story description… it says Jiraiya brings out the talent he has which implies it’s locked away for now, but the second thing he says is that Ebisu is a sensor and a tracker. Naruto wouldn’t even know what the word sensor means at this point of the story.

Great chapter, keep up the awesome work