Reviews for Community Service and Perhaps a Slice of Heaven
My Whispers In The Dark chapter 15 . 1/7
The part where betting on cleaning the yard was great and at the end when Sanosuke mistakenly took the hand of Megumi was a nice moment, I'm glad Katsu has woken up and just need to start counting that was what happened to him. I'll be waiting for your update.
jasminemilktea chapter 15 . 5/13/2013
I've really enjoyed reading this story! You've included so much of what I loved about the anime, I felt like I was watching some extra episodes or a missing OVA. It's clear that you were watching very closely and taking note of the dialogue so that you could make your story fit so exactly to the series. I especially like the more serious moments you wrote of Sanosuke and Megumi each thinking back on their memories of the past. They were written so skillfully and felt exactly in-character and fit what little we know of their pasts just right. Thank you for a great read that brought back my memories of my favorite episodes of season 1. I will be waiting to read more.
Bunnyfire chapter 15 . 6/27/2012
this story of yours is out of this would your I LOVE IT, you writing is EPIC, I love the detail in the story you've truly out done yourself!- I truly love this story PLEASE OH PWEASE continue writing it I can't wait for the next chapter!, I can't wait to see what happened next! :D.
Stealiana chapter 15 . 6/9/2012
So this story has been on my favorite list for a long time, but I don't think I've ever reviewed (poor form).

I think you are an amazing writer. Your character portrayals are true to how they were developed in the series (from what I remember, anyway), and yet you have also rounded them out to make their realizations/commentary meaningful and insightful. The character arcs are believable, and in taking them on that path you've successfully rounded them all out. I can definitely say I am rooting for certain outcomes, and I'm sure you'll deliver when you have time to keep writing.

Perhaps its the fact that it's late at night, but I did gloss over reading some of the scenes that were less integral to the Sano/Meg or Kaoru/Ken relationships. I recall doing this when I first started reading the story as well, way back in the day - evidenced by the fact that I remembered some scenes after 8 years (learning to read, hot springs vacation, picking flowers) while forgetting others (like trying to blow up the government - kind of important!).

I would say this is my personal hang-up though - the character arcs and development are just more original and interesting to me than the terrorist plot side. It's just what I'm looking for as a reader and finding to be the primary plot. I know the attack on Katsu and other things are important for creating conflict for the parts of the story that I do read more closely, if that makes sense. I guess what I'm saying is I hope you keep spending time on the more original aspects of your story, as I find that the most satisfying to read.

Nice job, I hope you keep writing anything/everything, because you are very talented.
riza chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
hahaha this is great!
Death101- Fox Version chapter 15 . 12/12/2011
Wow. Glad to see that he's okay. And Kaoru giving into the sweets was too cute. Awesome job! Please update soon!

-D101
Death101- Fox Version chapter 14 . 12/12/2011
Wow. That's a lot to take in. I hope that he didn't tell them anything but if they left, he probably did. Anyways, awesome job!

-D101
Death101- Fox Version chapter 13 . 12/12/2011
Oh heck. Poor guy. I wonder what they are going to do to the store. Awesome job!

-D101
Death101- Fox Version chapter 12 . 12/12/2011
Oh hell! Don't tell them! As for the little girl playing doctor. That was very cute and sweet. Awesome job!

-D101
Death101- Fox Version chapter 11 . 12/12/2011
Oh hell. I hope his store doesn't get destroyed! That would suck! As for Megumi. Aw. It's nice that she hopes that she'll have another chance but I feel bad for Kaoru. Oh well. Awesome job!

-D101
Death101- Fox Version chapter 10 . 12/12/2011
Oh wow. Sanosuke nearly beat Megumi in a verbal duel and now people are going to 'save' Japan. Awesome job!

-D101
Death101- Fox Version chapter 9 . 12/12/2011
Haha. Oh men. Poor Kaoru though. Haha.

-D101
Death101- Fox Version chapter 8 . 12/12/2011
Aw. Poor Sano. Probably not the best fight for him. As for Yahiko, he just can't win. Haha. But Kaoru and Megumi shouting at each other was the best!

-D101
Death101- Fox Version chapter 7 . 12/12/2011
Ah. So that's where the clean laundry came from. Anyways, Yahiko's reaction to his 'problem' was very cute. As was the idea of the artist drawing a rooster and a fox. I want to see how that comes out. Anyways, awesome job!

-D101
Death101- Fox Version chapter 6 . 12/12/2011
Ouch. As if the kid didn't already not like him, now the kid's crush has a crush on Sanosuke. You just love messing with him, I guess? Anyways, awesome job!

-D101
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