Interesting! I look forward to more. Hopefully you will get somewhere with this unlike other Red fics.

Be a badass. Also. Badass mother incoming. Now that's what you want. A challenge.

That was great! I really enjoyed Red meeting Rosa and Professor Juniper, also really excited to seen whom Red meets next chapter. Thank you for the great update.

I'm honestly loving this! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Very cool, I went in a little skeptical but by the end I was 100% with it. Red isn't just one-dimensional and the tone here is great - it somehow manages to perfectly capture the feeling of battling that mysterious yet larger-than-life sort of trainer.

Nitpick: I'm not a huge fan of in-text notes for scene changes (find them distracting) but that's just a personal preference type of thing.

Seriously, all in all good stuff here.

*points at this fanfic*
OMAE WA MOU SHINDEIROU

don't let this die, a superb start hope it gets update as soon as possible

Pm me back already

Please don't let this story die.

I love this story, it’s very good and has lots of potential. Also while I don’t want to be the guy who asks you to update a story in a review for a comepletely different story I just want to say that I hope you remember to update your old stories.

Very interesting! You have my attention.
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i hope this fic will not be dead like every other pokemon red fic.

i love it

Great story, hope you come out with the next chapter soon

Really looking to reading more. This is shaping up to be a really good red pokemon fic

Hey, welcome. So look a warning given you are writing a Pokemon story. Farla, St Elmo's Fire, Talarc, Spencer841, and a few others are known bullies on this site who review only to destroy stories and promote drama.

They will push their believes down your throat, demand you redo your story to fit their wants and no, they are the super minority and hated by the fandom. They also tend to post pms publicly so responding to them is ill advised.

They start off with a disclaimer about honestly thinking it would help. It doesn't they want you to be screwed over as they complain about trival nonsense that got their panties in a twist.

They think Pokemon is slavery. That you should capitalize the way they want, fyi Pokemon names are not species names and that's been officially recongized in modern English. So yes it's correct yo capitalize Pikachu for instance. Oh, and they give out false dialogue formatting. Don't get me started on Arceus.

Oh and if they say that they are being bullied. Know that they are lying as they been doing it too this fandom for years now and are just pissed that a group are working to stop it. The admins told them to knock it off.

If that's not enough on my profile is proof its utter nonsense. oh and if there is a guest reviewer titled "Take Down Hybrid" know that is's actually Unique Yet Sensible the biggest of all of Farla's supporters and an utter troll who only doing this shit because Hybrid gave her criticism. The girls gone off the deep end and into complete insanity.

Best to remove it.

Speaking of them they had twice agreed to stop but don't. Even after being told to stop by the admins, their friends, and even random strangers. Right now they are somehow convinced that Hybrid, a woman, is a man.

If they claim they have proof don't. Its all utter nonsense and they been told by the admins to take it down.

Furthermore, if some goes on about us spaming accounts or something know its likely juat another troll so block them...