“I do not write for fun and kicks”
You don’t write at all anymore, bud! :(

bueno 3 cap un calco del anime

Shizu: Were you attacked by Grimms?
Roy: Yes!
Shizu: Good, that's one less loose end. *kills Roy*
(Reference from COD MW2 (Not MWII) General Sheperd, Ghost and Roach)

Shizu: That was no message. *BANG!kills Roy* This is a message.
Aura: The Valeans thought they could decieve the mighty Supreme Being. When they find that body, all of the Valean Council will cry for war.

in case if anyone is lookong for the reference, this is from COD MW3 (not MWIII(2023at the end of 'No Russian' mission the final lines of Makarov)

Theres is no volume three
Why is everyone talking about volume three
Did the author delete it?

To Bluenait

Eat shit and die.

-.- really? exact the same shit as in Overlord but in RBWY ?

fuck this trash

*poke* *poke* *poke*

ok. i apologize if you were expecting constructive criticism. i don't beleive I am that good(in terms of ability) to give a useful one. but I have to admit, the story did feel weird at first at least limited to ainz. but it was still very nice.

but at the 3rd volume I feel everything fell apart. i don't really understand why I feel it was different, not pleasant and wasn't even entertaining anymore. i apologize that I am not able to specify what it was but if perhaps other feel the same way, maybe they can give you some insight. though till volume 2 the story was incredibly well written outside of the problem with ainz. but that was no longer the case, now that I think of it maybe it was due to the gap between the two volumes. it feels like completely different stories despite the plot continuing.

ig your writing for yourself then hope you enjoy it! it really is well written though(till vol 2 at least)

oh it seems it was my mistake to assume you had updated... it was a prior update I simply hadn't read. my bad

PS: glad to see your updating though. happy to see that unlike other authors you are still continuing despite any and all criticism. despite what i or anyone says I do hope you shall continue your work and improve for the sake of both your and our enjoyment

Good one, distracting Albedo with her obsession to flee (I don't fully buy the fact that they didn't see her flee, but I don't have a major problem with that).

Amazing

I am only here because the title is an Ultrakill reference

Honestly, Raven deserves every bit of this and worse. For all that Ozpin kept crap from STRQ, Raven just uses her pseudo-Darwinian mentality as justification to do whatever the hell she pleases. You can have her more nuanced, true, but in the end, she's little more than a bandit who enjoys the lifestyle, with no real morality whatsoever. I have little sympathy for her. Hell, I have more sympathy for Olgierd from "The Witcher 3: Hearts of Stone", and that didn't stop me from punting him towards Gaunter O'Dimm...