Reviews for Something Wicked This Way Comes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hear the SS Ainz x Lisa being built in the distance... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your characterization for Ainz is off. His dialogue doesn't sound like him. You seem to lack the sophistication required to write complex characters. Also, you've displayed a lack of understanding of source material mechanics. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Salem gonna get wet weak knees when she meets Ainz. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its always a pleasure reading your works. I love your Ainz's shenanigans and interactions and im enjoying the lisa subplot hopefully its develops well. But who is Ainz going to meet? I hope I dont have to wait long to find out *hint* *hint*. Overall a Solid Chapter please more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uff tiempo que no leo está asombrosa historia en verdad me encantó leer este capítulo sin duda fue lo mejor saber que no estaba abonado gracias autor por favor sigue escribiendo más de esta historia quiero leer más |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter can't wait to see what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() wohooo! a new chapter thank you. interesting interludes to make things much more complex it‘s like reading murayama‘s work itself. so ainz did help lisa lavender some time ago. hmm i think it will result in a lot of akward conversations for ainz if albedo won‘t get her first ;) as always i look forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter, keep writing, hopefully the next chapter won't be too late |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like that Ainz is reaching out to the various factions, but the human disguise seems OOC. Considering the problems he had with his skeleton body in canon, if he had access to a human form he would've used it. Further, his posing as a business owner makes no sense since that doesn't play to his strengths; it would've made more sense to have Demiurge handle negotiations (or at least use Sebas as the public face of the company since he has that gravitas to him). It would've been more in character for Ainz to do as he did in canon and take a Huntsman exam as Momon (not every Huntsman went to an academy, after all). Running around murdering things and collecting loot is more his wheelhouse, not running a business. Other than that, again, nice job with his reaching out to the various factions. It just could use a bit of polish to be more consistent with canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... Audience with 'her', I can only think of Sienna, or god forbid, Salem herself. Also, considering Ainz's forged background, he gotta look out for Ren and Nora. |
![]() ![]() Not really a fan of stories that try to somehow make Ainz human It would be more in line if he had representatives do most of the talking and if needed he would just do the illusion magic on his face while wearing some guantlets like he does when he meets with Enri and Nfirea He doesn't even really need an excuse to wear his Momon armor considering he's in Remnant Hell nobody would even question if he wore something to conceal his face Also it's been known that Ainz human self is super plain and even forgetable so I don't know why anyone would even look in Ainz direction It's his Momon persona that usually woos people (Evil Eye) Again not a fan of Human Ainz stories as they take important characteristics from Ainz away which is his Emotion suppression which also suppresses his humanity But I love the second plot point you've injected which has been only lightly touched in the light novels, his love for adventuring I'm sure you're thinking of making Ainz create an adventurers guild of some sort within his company or something along those lines Very rarely do fics focus on Ainz love of adventuring and I'm glad you're trying to incorporate that into the story After all he never wanted to be some supreme overlord and his objective has always been to find his friends or anyone who knows him and his guild and making a company would indeed do that But anyway hope the human form is a one time thing or perhaps something he saves as his ace in the hole against someone like Ozpin who seems like someone who would become very curious about Ainz Hell I can even see a potential plot point in where Ozpin thinks the Ainz in human form is merely a puppet for the company and Ozpin tries to search for the real person behind the company But enough of my rants, good set-up chapter overall hope to see more 1000 iq Ainz and Beacon academy antics in the future |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this chapter, but I have to say that Shizu is not a fully grown woman by any stretch of the word. Going by height alone she is probably about 14 at most. |