Honestly I like this story a lot. My love for dragonball also helps it at least a little bit. Also if you don’t like it don’t read it.

Loved all 38 chapters and I can't wait for more soon so excited!

I see what you did.

Great fic btw

Heh, thats a right way to write a fic.

I wonder when Ten learns any healing ability thought, and not for him. Senzu beens only can do so much.

i can see that you are going to nerf the mc with how the cost of skills is skyrocketing and other restrictions so imma stop reading right here

Seriously gamerdbz and you get melodramatic emo garbedge? , i was waiting for the storry to finaly start but its jus emo slice of life with escalating melodrama! ...fuck this was a trap! ...no wonder it vas causing me nauzea!

So much s.o.l, teen drama and angst... whers the meat of the story ?

Feels nerfed, fights stupid, and no imaginacion ...

Why is killing summy pirates still a thing also he makes it sound like fighting back is a sin ...wtf

Oh pleas dont wuss out , and become a cartoonishly stupid mc

Thank you for not making the mc a total whimp!

Heres where i have a problem like the insight skill lets him jnow of their problem tbh bro nobody asked it kike the system is making him guilty well
Whatever
Great Chapter

That man is a dirty bastard for leaving me on such a cliff hanger.

derailed? cannon has been fkn shot in the head and buried. now I just hope it's not gonna pull a new Vegas on me

Good chapter