Reviews for Fox in the Leaf
GorkhaWarlord chapter 50 . 1/2
Sasuke getting character development. I am pleasantly surprised.
Child of Dreams chapter 36 . 11/18/2023
Fox summons.
Anonymous chapter 22 . 10/31/2023
Loving the fanfic so far... now about the possible solution to Naruto's problem that Hiruzen came up with that concerned one of his students whom have a way of living under the radar somewhat? That could be literally anyone of the 3 students he had. Orochimaru left the village and made the Hidden Sound after leaving the Akatsuki and no one heard anything about him till the Chuunin Exams... with only Jiraiya being able to get any information about him, and even then it was very little. Speaking of... Jiraiya is Konoha's spy master and has a way of being under the radar himself. The only time he really isn't is when he gets caught peeping. Tsunade also falls under that due to her having left the village due to mourning and the only time she surfaces is to gamble, even though she is terrible at it. She even henges into different ages for herself to avoid the loan sharks whom she owes. I'm not asking for any hints or the like cause honestly I love the whole, I'm giving a hint, but not too much information deal. Just thought I'd make that small observation.
Kalvorax chapter 43 . 10/6/2023
This chapter made me laugh during the whole thing... this was great.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/19/2023
Is Naruto no longer the reincarnation of Ashura? Since he died, does he retain that characteristic? If not, what do you have in mind for if the Akatsuki revive the 10 tailed beast?
jixuel chapter 5 . 9/16/2023
It doesn't make much sense for the village not to have an ANBU team watching over Naruto 24 hours a day, considering he's a jinchuriki and they KNOW what the village thinks about him. I never really understood why the village leadership (apart from Danzo) let this happen and pretended not to see it. This treatment of the jinchuriki will only make him mentally unstable and cause him to lose control, or cultivate worse and worse feelings about the village, which doesn't bode well for the village's so-called weapon of war
arata7kasuga chapter 6 . 9/8/2023
hope he isn't walking in all fours for too long, yeesh. Also, can't authors let Hinata actually have a friend earlier in life? shouldn't be too much to ask for. poor girl
arata7kasuga chapter 1 . 9/8/2023
I really doubt ANBU or Hiruzen wouldn't notice what was happening pretty quickly.
Shadow's soul chapter 17 . 9/8/2023
logically there is pretty much no reason for him reshape his body. after the first time, they should realize that it's probable better he gets discovered rather than be stuck in his human form and be weaker because of it
Shadow's soul chapter 13 . 9/8/2023
Kawarimi is broken. it's broken in the original and somehow you've made it more broken. I like this story but having the substitution being used like this is bad. if you do a rewrite I think you should have substitution be used very rarely if not at all. I mean... substitution with the bells? really... I can make sense of it if he at least made contact with the bells. but considering thats not what happened then it's just bad writing.

this isn't me trying to flaim or hate on the story. but when you consider how Kawarmi works, the way its being used kind of destroys a lot of combat... especially when used on others.
Lindon chapter 39 . 8/21/2023
EehIDontGiveADattebane1 chapter 52 . 8/12/2023
No fuckin way I called it, are you giving naruto the ability to use the chains?!. I can't wait to see the rest of this if, you do have a sequel? I hope there is a sequel
EehIDontGiveADattebane1 chapter 29 . 8/12/2023
You're doing fucking great with the story, I wonder if naruto will get the Adamantine sealing chains. Or at least an evolved/ mutated version that are stronger , keep up the great work man
MASK3D-B4TT4LION chapter 2 . 8/1/2023
not hinatashit !
Kitten Arina chapter 64 . 6/29/2023
This giant author note is bad enough but it’s worse because you provide no story with it.
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