Reviews for Walking On Thin Ice |
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![]() ![]() What load of dumb shit, why is the SI a retarded naive imbecile? Impossible to even finish the first chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you write more? This fic is gas |
![]() ![]() ![]() what? i can't believe someone people dont like the story. its an AU of course it will be different, and its amazing, its new, its fresh, its interesting and a different si oc |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Firstly, let me say this is a great Hurt/Comfort fic, really hits the feels sometimes and thank you author for writing this for everyone's enjoyment. That out of the way, the MC is so incredibly unbearably edgy... God the amount of times logic was tossed aside so Haku could have an edgy "deep" moment made me cringe so bad I needed to close the fic for a while. I agreed with Haku's peace logic at first but it was overused and no side character ever challenges his logic... How is no one able to counter any of Haku's arguments (Kushina's attempt was laughable). Haku is reincarnated, if he was at least 12 when he died then by 13(when he makes genin) he should have a 25 y/o life experience yet he acts as an edgy "we live in a society" 13 y/o and nobody calls him out on it... Just pissed me off whenever this otherwise good story handled good plot points terribly for edgy Haku to cry on Hanabi's lap. Still thank you author for writing this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do people actually find this shit funny? Who the fuck likes to read about a grown man manipulating a child into crossdressing and then proceeding to record said child in such a humiliating position to possibly use the footage as blackmail. Yeah, I'm not reading whatever this weirdo shit is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a blast. It has been a long time since I've binged through an entirety of a fanfiction, but this one definitely had me hooked from the start. You also made me a fan of Hanabi. I almost didn't wanna read at the start when I saw the pairing but then you handled it greatly. I wish there were more chapters, but it was good while it lasted. Thanks for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really, it was one of the best stories I had ever read, such a shame that it hasn't been updated in over a year. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I mean... Haku-san, you were a hypocrite. You were almost dying and had given up on life at that time. You were the first to break the promise. And you had the gall to tell Haku something like that. |
![]() ![]() Stopped reading as soon as you forced Haku to join Konoha and eliminated any, and all, free will. Haku was strong-armed and threatened to join Konoha and he just rolled over and accepted it. This is pathetic. I’m done reading this, what a waste of time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sometimes when you are too tired of world, tired of people, tired of living you just want to end it all, to just disappear |
![]() ![]() ![]() So we’re in the reverse world (that’s the world of menma, basically naruto if his parents are still alive) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing, one of the better stories I’ve read recently, hope it will be continued. |
![]() ![]() It's been nearly a year since the last update. Did you drop this story? |
![]() ![]() Me after sitting down and Listening to Kushina's entire Speech and Being unphased by it: So...what you're saying is, you and this village...wish to experience Pain? Right before I turn the village into an ice sculpture. |