...Hm. Awfully straightforward romance, compared to later stories. I spent the whole time wondering "what's the catch"? (That's not to say I didn't enjoy it. )

Oh, that's wonderful. Thank you for writing this.

awwwwws :')

Aw, that was way too short, but amazing still. 3

I wish I had a crystal ball that would show me whom I'm meant to be with.
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Lucky Toby. :p

Pretty, little story, that makes you wanna lay back and dream it on. :)
I love this Jareth..

Loved every word!

Well, this was a beautiful little story! I'm so happy for all of them. And This one seriously made me almost cry for Jareth a couple times. :D

love it! but if you consider following up? maybey go into detail on the pregnancy, and over all new life sarah has in the underground, that'd be awesome:)

And I am so very glad you were interested in writing a story for this challenge! You captured the characters beautifully, and the story flowed along like a fairy tale. Absolutely wonderful. One of the best Labyrinth stories I've read!

I think that prompt was an excellent idea. I've always wanted to do something similar for movies, but sadly I'm poor.

Anyway, I loved how Toby was a bigger part of the story here. Most of the time he's rarely included which makes me kind of sad. So that was nice. I liked the way Sarah and Jareth's relationship formed as well. It was slow but concise and well formed. :)

I quite enjoyed it.

Loved it.

Sweet and a lovely ending for everyone and a pleasant build up in the situation. Good character treatment.

You, my friend, are officially my favorite writer. Enough said.

The only one of his kind. Sad and yet oddly liberating.

And hope for a future.

Very nicely done.