Absolutely brilliant! Not a traditional story, but still the J/S romance. I loved Toby's involvement, great work

Wow... definitely a great story. Great work. :)

Strangely this reminded me of Beauty and the Beast. Lovely story and I like how you moved the pace of the story.

this is a lovely story. i enjoyed reading it very much.

Very sweet. You are a very adept Labyrinth author.

Wow, I love your story. It's wonderfull.

I started through one of the Labyrinth communities, looking for a quick read. The summary sounded interesting, so I clicked. And there was your name, Scattered Logic. As if I haven't read enough of your stories already!

Quick and sweet. Well done on the challenge.

Long and beautiful and the ending as good as the rest of it, if not better. Love this!

Enchanting!

That was like Beauty and the Beast if the Beast was all sexy and Bowie. Kudos.

Short and sweet. I liked this. Time shifting paradoxes being what they are, it's a good thing Toby even remembers making the wish. Her poor parents, though...

Yeah happy endings for Jareth and Sarah! It was almost Beauty and the Beast there for a little bit. Works for them.

This story is so nearly totally perfect in every way! Your pacing, the reason why Sarah must be saved and how she ended up wished away are wonderful and believable. The relationship builds slowly, hesitantly and is therefore so real... Anyway, in case you can't tell- I loved it, truly. Write some more J/S goodness! Thank you for sharing this. -Clare

I was hooked in the first few sections! Keep up the mamzaiing work, and there will be more revies from me, I'm just getting tire.d.

["And we have to do it in your bedroom?" she asked suspiciously.

He gave a delighted smile. "Do I make you uncomfortable, Sarah?"]

I absolutely love love LOVE those lines.

There is no denying it. Jareth would do anything to keep Sarah save. Great story.