Very good.
Love when Remus and Moony get along.

Ooh I like it. Well done.

It makes much more sense to assume that Snape was just as guilty in the werewolf incident as Black.

Perhaps Sirius DID tell him to go out at night alone to a remote place.

It's the proverbial challenge to jump off a cliff. Snape is described as intelligent. Would an intelligent person really jump?

Snape goes alone. He knows that the others will be there together. He knows that he has no chance if he's surprised by four people in a prepared ambush position. He knows that they hate him just much as he hates them. It has come to magical fights already. Outside of the school a war is fought. Those four and he favour different sides in this war. Killing someone is just a matter of time, it WILL happen.

Is he really stupid enough to go without being prepared for a dirty fight to overcome their advantages? Snape must have intended to make something happen that would make them regret crossing him. Like, let them attack him, being prepared for a capable defence, casting something with silver, if it doesn't kill Lupin have him executed at the end, things like that. Snape wasn't surprised by that werewolf, he went out there prepared to kill.

I hate Snape and I'm convinced that many people who like and defend him do so because Alan Rickman was a very charismatic actor. If they had cast someone who always plays arseholes, who knows?

Great little two-parter. You are a talented writer and I look forward to more stories from you - especially the continuation of A Step to the Right.

Lovely story

Love it

A shortish, but enjoyable and well crafted story.

A nice start. I really liked the image of Lilly as Leia. Thank you for sharing your story

Love all of your writing, I am sad I discovered years after it appears you stopped! Hopefully you write again and I can read more!

I really love this story, I truly hope to see more of it.

I really hope you add more to this. I love your stories and this one definitely feels incomplete

Your concept of the trunk-portrait is novel and interesting. I love what you’ve done with lycanthropy. I’m interested to see what else you do with this little universe. X

PLEASE DO MORE! THANK YOU FOR YOUR HARD WORK!

This is very promising. I suppose that Sirius raises Harry but that Petunia stays in touch. She is angry with Dumbledore but not bound to raise Harrry unwillingly. Petunia might come to care a little for Lily's orphaned son especially because her contact with him is optional.

I really like this! I'd love you to write more, though of course I understand if you don't. I love the way there's such a change to the original while still feeling within that world... if that makes sense. Anyhow - enjoyed it. :)