all the training and only to have 5(48.. Goku 43) more pl than Goku.. feels bad

This story has been an absolute delight to read! From start to finish, the comedy, fluff, fighting, plot, just everything has been phenomenal and I can't wait for chapter 10!

Oozaru SS SSj4. That's literally the transformation.

I like the start of this though. Little clinical, but concise and easy to read.

I can understand how you created this horrible abomination that is full of grammatical errors. You literally copy pasted someone else's fanfic. It really shows what your work and what the plagiarized part is. The one with the shitty grammar is obviously yours lmaoooooo. You didn't even bother hiding that you stole someone else's work, yet you don't give credit to the original source. Holy fucking shit. It is copied word by word even down to every single letter.

He destroyed people nuts and is thinking of commuting cannibalism and he wants to have a light future. Doesn't make sense

goku's biggest mistake marry ChiChi

fucking shit

a good story

Ah yes, the harem is starting to become viable again...

Soooo SI PL has gone up by like 3 points since the start of the story? Wow...

nice

Imagine cucking your self-insert in your own story because you're too much of a coward to derange from canon and write something unique. I have seen a lot of fanfics that ride on rails but this takes the cake.

are you not going to continue this story?

Loved the sadist XD

Again Oolong’s story scene was too long