Using the Rabbit Gang (or whatever they're called) as an excuse to force the Canon events is just pathetic. If he had such conviction against 'bad guys', why is THIS the first time he's shown it? Utterly forced nonsense. Case in point: why didn't he just kill Yamcha then, since the guy is a bandit who has clearly killed people? It's the exact same thing but he didn't want to 'derail Canon' so it was ignored. Pathetic.

The fact that Bulma and Goku just left him without a second thought is ALSO pathetic. After all the things he did for Bulma, there is no way she would have just ditched him right before the conclusion of their journey. Not even MENTIONING how Goku himself would have wanted to help. It is clear that you simply wanted an excuse to make a rehash of Canon events and just throw Bulma at Yamcha. Once again, forced and pathetic nonsense.

So after ALL THAT SHIT with Bulma he is just going to give up and let her get with Yamcha? Utterly pathetic. MC is trying to cling WAY too closely to Canon.

I like where you're going with this but why did you have to copy so much directly from Dragon Ball Redux by DuncanIdaho2014 and even that final Krillin scene from ANOTHER fanfic? Could you not just come up with your own intro? Seems like blatant plagiarism to me since you didn't even properly cite the source material.

Anyways, why is it that I only learned the MC's name is Baali at the END of the chapter? Did I just miss it somewhere or did you skip over it at some point? How did you even come up with Baali?

shouldnt goku have a power level of like 10?

Well, the first chapter was nice. Then the main character from DXD decided to take the MC's place.

Goku wasn’t a bad parent and as for him not kissing Chi-Chi its Goku im pretty sure he didn’t even know it was called kissing

WHY! Since Baali is willing to kill, then he could have killed Yamcha and prevented Bulma from being with him currently or in the future since I don't remember a single moment where he was useful to the timeline. XD

interested in this story hope to see more

all the training and only to have 5(48.. Goku 43) more pl than Goku.. feels bad

This story has been an absolute delight to read! From start to finish, the comedy, fluff, fighting, plot, just everything has been phenomenal and I can't wait for chapter 10!

Oozaru SS SSj4. That's literally the transformation.

I like the start of this though. Little clinical, but concise and easy to read.

I can understand how you created this horrible abomination that is full of grammatical errors. You literally copy pasted someone else's fanfic. It really shows what your work and what the plagiarized part is. The one with the shitty grammar is obviously yours lmaoooooo. You didn't even bother hiding that you stole someone else's work, yet you don't give credit to the original source. Holy fucking shit. It is copied word by word even down to every single letter.

He destroyed people nuts and is thinking of commuting cannibalism and he wants to have a light future. Doesn't make sense

goku's biggest mistake marry ChiChi

fucking shit