Hopefully, you will come back soon with another chapter.

Fire story. When's the new chapter though?

interesting that you are going through all the 3 years of the timeskip albeit sparsely. love this though. it is interesting indeed.
would love for you to come back and update but i am not sure if updates are spordic like that or not.
if they are sporadic then i await the next chapter.
if not then please come back and update cause this is an interesting story with different things form other and more coherent than canon.

first of all,hope you return to this story.

poke poke

bro come back to this fic please

PEAK

Hey, glad to see you’re back, love both this and hurricane suite.

I been wondering something. Will Garaga be Naruto personal summon? Since Aoda is Susuke personal summon, and Manda is Orochimaru personal summon, Im quite curious if Garaga will be Naruto summon.

Please! Please! Please! Update this and Hurricane Suite. Two of the best fanfictions that I have had the joy to read.

Love the way that Naruto is visibly “falling to the dark side” not just with the obvious physical transition with the eyes but his mannerisms as well. The constant cheek biting the clenching of fists. He’s angry! The best part of all of this is the way that you are treating his use of the nine tails chakra. He’s like an addict, using it at any time he might feel weak or scared. Really fun and carefully thought out portrayal of amcharacter in a bad situation acting largely on fear and anger.

Hope we can catch up to the prologue at the beginning soon and get into the larger plot. I’m excited to see him out in the world!

Im not sure i like where this is going. Id definately have liked it if this was completed and i could read until he finally gets out from under Orochimarus thumb. honestly, i dont really like the fact hes under it in the first place. If he had Orochimarus direct tutolidge then yes, i think he would have grown far stronger then he wouldve under Jirayai (mostly because of how bad a teacher he is and because they most likely will be traveling for a ton of the timeskip) but its obvious Orochimaru is treatibg naruto more like a Side Project. Sasukes most likely a bit stronger then naruto now which i hate because of how large the gap was back in the first book. Naruto, in my opinion, has far better potential then Sasuke. As far as i can see, Sasukes only real talents is his bloodline and hunger for power. I cant even bother to list the amount of potential naruto has, but anyone reading this already knows what his potential is. All in all, this has been surprisingly disapoonting so far. But i still hope it continues to be updated.

I feel like Narutos too weak… and i have to express my disapointment that he becomes a Snake Summoner

Haha lol, Naruto got DESTROYED by Sasuke in that spar. Wow, Naruto really isn’t impressive. Tbh, I think Ino and Kiba will more than catch up to him soon — they’d probably be able to beat him. Naruto is too stubborn and immature.

Bruh update wtf