If Lupin was actually good teacher in book 3 he should of been running workshops or dedicating lesson time to the patronus charm. not only teaching the son of his friends after he had directly approached him asking for help.

Say what you want about the story that this story is based on but at least in that story Harry made it to Hogwarts before the author gave up on it. This story stalled out before Harry's birthday so maybe taking on a story that someone else gave up on wasn't such a great idea... just saying. The original premise to the story waa interesting but the whole thing has felt rushed and strangely enough the pacing is ridiculously slow, it's kind of a paradox really. I love the pairing Harry/Tonks is one of my favorites but she comes off as a bit of slut in this, if I'm being honest and it makes you wonder if she was always this easy or if Harry was a special case. I'll keep my eye out for updates but I'm pretty sure this will join the thousands of other abandoned stories in FFN

Good lord Hermione found a way to third-wheel her way into the story.

Tonks is kind of easy in this story, huh?

What is the deal with Tonks calling Harry Boy Wonder in so many Harry/Tonks fics? Is it an unwritten fanon rule or something? I probably wouldn't even notice it but I've read quite a few stories with that pairing so it's fresh in my mind.

Please continue.

Cool story. I hope you write more HONKS!

This is absolutely hilarious.

This is a very interesting story. Following in case you ever decide to revisit it. Thanks for the great writing

On hiatus, or abandoned?

I usually skip over lemons, so I cannot say if it was good or not. Besides that, I am enjoying the fic.

I've never been a big fan of Dumbledore. He is far to manipulative for me. You have made him quite evil, planning on sacrificing Harry. He is really being a right bastard.

And then the retard abandoned the story.

really love this story can't wait for new chapters

wish this had continued