Reviews for One Punch Deku |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Bring this back |
![]() ![]() I never like these kind of chapters or the reaction from the MC (aka Izuku). Reason is that it feels over the top with how the MC has this inner conflict or has some kind of angst happen to them to the point that it makes the reader wonder if the author has a fetish for that kind of stuff. I understand why Izuku is like that and helps show his inner thoughts but the way its written makes it feel like the author is just making the MC suffer for fetish reasons (seriously, the amount of over the top angst in fanfics as of late is just dumb, especially when they are just ripping eachother off) |
![]() ![]() Yeah Izuku having trouble when he's suppose to be like Saitama strong is pretty dumb. Are you nerfing him on purpose just to have these "over the top dramatic moments" happen for the sake of suspense? I could understand if Izuku wasn't strong to make sense but its pretty dumb to make a strong MC and then nerf them just so a certain plot element happens. (looking at you DBZ crossover fanfic writers) |
![]() ![]() Not gonna lie, I thought Inko died due with how Izuku was acting and filled with rage. With how the previous chapters were written, it felt like something bad happened to Inko which explained why Izuku was trying hard to keep his emotionaless expression to keep his rage in check but this chapter proved me wrong lol |
![]() ![]() Thank you! It honestly gets very annoying when fanfics have the MC tell/explain to someone who they just met everything about themselves or giving away stuff/secrets to complete and total strangers. Like someone in a review pointed out "the MC/OCs have no obligation in helping anyone or giving up their stuff to complete and total strangers that will literally stab them in back, especially those who steal their belongings", so it's a nice change of pace that that Izuku told off everyone when they tried to get him to reveal his secret. Plus, Izuku's reasoning made sense and helped explain his attitude. Oh and for everyone complaining about Izuku being OOC and certain canon events bing changed in the fanfic: you do know that if you wanted everything to cheap and lazy be a copy and paste of canon events with literally little to no changes, then why the heck are you reading the fanfiction in the first place when there is already a manga and anime for that? |
![]() ![]() lol Midoriya saying no was funny since this will send a better message and help prove that even though he's quirkless he can still be a hero. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Man, what an incredibly good story... I hope you can update it soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() With just class 1A i cant rly imagine a better team up two close ranged fighters izuku and Kirishima, mid range with bakugo, long range with shoto, support with eraser |
![]() ![]() I habe now read this story twice and i love this story. The characters are very good build and the progress ist also in a good pace. I hope that you'll finish this story but I have no Probleme when you need time to progress in the same quality that I like so much. Best regards. Nateru P.S. I'm from Germany and my English is a work in progress thing so I hope you can understand my review. |
![]() ![]() Hey guys unfortunately this author passed away so sadly this story won't be getting anymore updates... As much as we all wanted to see how this ended! Rip |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are an idiot or what? He knows perfectly that someone without powers is useless in a fight, that he be the exception not only that is true. Look how the people see the sinners differently but when they realize that he is the exception and if he can do something without powers he gets like a child, who decides the inutil one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! Buff Tintin lmao! I’m so glad you referenced that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whens the next update going to drop |
![]() ![]() This OOC cringe green top is not any better than his canon counterpart. |