Oh my word, little Nessie is already so attached to Jacob but of course she is. The imprint works both ways if at this young age.

Loved this side story and I have to admit, it really made sense to play it that way. I truly believe even though Nessie is still young, her capacity to think and feel is way beyond her years. I could definitely see her acting like this.

I had to laugh at the end. Jacob going all Alpha but yet the interaction with Alice showing his tender side. Perfect.

Loved this version so much better. I hated how they made Jacob seem like such a wimp. I love your version of the imprint.

I think I caught something during the actual imprint and if I know you, that was a brilliant setup.

Also, the plan between Nessie and Jacob was just amazing. Those two I'm sure are going have a few more of those.

Really loving this so far. I'm glad your setting up your story with a little insight into Jacob and Renesmee.

Can't believe your back. Loved your Chuck stories, T.F. always my fav. Love twilight so can't wait to see where you take this.

Great start. Love the introspection from Jacob. I know you, and can tell already some hints that you dropped in this first chapter. Can't wait to see where you take this.

Welcome back TIA, you've been missed!

p.s. Please finish Biggest Loser :)

Looking forward to reading more very soon.

Great story! Can’t wait to read more :)

Please write more! I am hooked!

Such a good start to a story (including your Author's Note).