Heart warming, sweet and touching. I love this bantering between them in which Jake's not nervous or apologizing and eliciting different feelings in both. You must write more of this. Your style of writing is very elegant. Can't wait to read all the chapters.

You just improve this story with every chapter. Thank you. Such a good read.

You know, your visions, dream links, etc... are nothing short of amazing. The way Nessie reacted being in the future vision was so incredibly awesome. Poor Nessie though, she so badly wants to prove to Jake that she loves him I'm afraid what she is going to do. I have an idea but am scared because this Nessie, the one you write, will stop at absolutely nothing to stay with Jake.

I hope she realizes that Jake would never leave her but if she thinks everything is connected by the Imprint... I'm just really worried what she is willing to do to make sure the Imprint is never severed. I know Jake loves her regardless, but I don't think she knows.

Please be nice...

Sassy Nessie, I love it. She is really coming into her own and she is not backing down from Jacob. I love it. You have made Nessie so strong and it is very refreshing that you can pull off a very strong Nessie, but in the same essence, also pull off just how much she loves and needs Jake.

The link argument back and forth had me rolling on the floor. That was so funny.

Then at the end, poor Nessie. She just wants Jake to accept that the Imprint is not stronger than her bond to him. You go girl.

Update!

Umm, okay, wow, uhh I guess Jacob DID notice the changes. I could just picture Nessie stunned beyond belief that Jake noticed those things about her. Gosh, he loves her so much and you can just see the struggle he's having. Poor Jake, how does he balance the need to tell her just how beautiful she is but also remember that she's not fully matured.

You know, with that said, I just thought of something that you've done that no one else has. You've aged her much quicker which means now I think about it, Jake would actually be much closer to her age. When you think about it, they are much closer in age in your story which I really like and that just adds to depth of their relationship.

And then at the end, when Nessie realized its her responsibility to protect Jake's heart, just perfect.

Very nice job. I just love Jacob so much, he is so good to Nessie.

You are spoiling us and I'm so far behind...

This chapter was yet another special chapter. Jake is so sweet, I don't know how you continue to write such emotions. There are a lot of great stories on this site, and I'm a sucker for love stories, but I don't think I've ever read one that hits the heart strings like you write Jake and Nessie.

There are great love stories like I said, but the emotions, the situations, the interaction of how you write this is just amazing. You touch on things we really wouldn't think of and its amazing.

Thank you again for another great chapter.

Whoa!

I don’t know what that bipolar manic word-salad was from ‘Debbie Hicks’ but let’s pretend we didn’t see her in the corner pretending to have pyrokenetic powers and just move on, m’kay?

Really look forward to your updates. One of the best stories on here.

21. Chapter 21-Trouble Afoot /Challenged
that Nessie heard then Jake Thrust hois on hands hardest then to her face something Happened proposed by the Koont'u'slo'lik was a ancient both minds begat to merged collided then exploding then suddely herself ws Linked Mom Yes He did to my face I am Betrothed What on your finto your finger his mother's ring Nessie my desire to be your mate do yiu approve this engement Yes! Hello Alice something alien happened he proposed Koont'ut'so'lik its a Ancient Vulcan Marriage prreposal as for our days as for oof all our tomorrows as from the time of the beginning as it is today it is now to you my husband it shall be Who Am I Revive me we are then Jake prepared to Ring then a very loudest *CLAAANG* then herself took ritual action dressed from the NASA Bodysuit was Slivery Vulcan religious wedding robes then from the screen repeated Kail'fi'fliee! hair was in Vulcan hair fashion who now Looked like T'Pring had Teenaged folded me down Ocampan ears were 100% pointed then challenged hand onto the ancient Jedite Vulcan gong was Very religious but spiritual I Hear them husband her voice cold but had attained Kolinahr was now very more than Fully Grown but more mature eyebrows were slanted the Cullens horrified then Systras rang then a young Vulcan woman carried by a very dozen of Acolytes were Vulcan women in white of spiritual but religious offices Herself was a hybrid I Burn my eyes is flame my eyes is flame Nessie daughter of Bella Bind us link us to thee Clan make two worlds with three as a alliance kneel herself in Red/white was a young but teenaged Vulcan Senior higher ranking Chief High Priestess of Mount Seleya of Gol What Ye are about to see come witness from the of the beginning without change this is the Vulcan heart this is the Vulcan soul this is Our Way Kail'far! Herself branded their minds Suddenly Thy are bonded t'll marriage you Jacob are her Betrothal yes Nessie you are beautfiul as Valdana here that suddenly Nahuel be our groomman yes you brought sister yes we found mates Shifters imprinted had kids eight is a lowed we burn as well we are kinsmen and kinswomen of Vulcan so they wholliest bring eight is enough then Pierced both with they with they Vanished the tore freely then herself had only eight so they Brought there good dead the three are As all of them they broke rul;e they never returned with implanted lematya poison poison then were with withneses wre as all bitten by her made a very powerful religious coven-pack The Blacks are put to sleep with the Cullens are Sentenced to death aged into very old age with as all of bitten best friends had hybrids freaks are next Newly turned these ones Guards rid of them with they then Sentenced to die then Atomized by Vaporizing in Oldest but fral ancient age then burnt Laid bodies and Sliced heads into two good with you rid of the both With the creator of Carlisle then Executed then found her/they guilty where you think you are going freaks then Tore fled good guards get them then Reneesmee Black yiu are charged are put to death by murder then her screams the head tore loose wit the Lycans with they the Cruelliest executed murdered then were as all of them burnt as all skins were Hardest punished then Cursed them to roam then brought there Finally End them here With they are More guards Burning bodies sliced heads killed by the Volturi good guard silenced are dead they are With as very as all of them deported they are Dead into a hologram of Heaven trapped here forever they are as all of mostly much many more as all of them from as all around the world with as all of them as all with very remains as all of them as all to as all rest to more as all of them blew apart to more A s all of them the very as all of them as all of things as all of them Deported wre as all witjh three each Destroyed with the both without were more Good bombed they Created as all of races a alliance as all of their as all intergalactic species as all more as all of things deported both to more with the ISS with as all of from here to from lands as all of them Then violently just blew up but blew apart bring them to the last but final one here then Executed then too late As all of the RV's /as all cars/trucks as all of them vanished were as all of into mountains more as all of them then Nothingness then Were as all of them as all were as all of gone then brought them then it really happened the gong appeared then With as all of homes/tomehomes with as all of them with schools and universties and colleges were more then to preschools then violently fused as a New breed of space travel schooling Nuked then bodies as all laid there good they are with cities gone in ruins then took from here as all of them then now the rebuilding it Warped with the milltary colleges/universites as all of with high schools/colleges/preschools and unversites then with palaces as all of them merged smashed freely lost freed FTL Were as all of them\nuked then that last stage fled from here Blew were more then too late the bodies were gone good used then as all of them fled from us both to start a new life blew freely as a Exiled race then it came too late Stranded to the truer planet Vulcan was as all of them as all years back then as all of them were freed of the bodies no longer with eighteen to as all of them to more as very far as all of them now as all of them merged homes as all of businesses then as all of them then With five blew freely from here then Vanished good we bring the very as all of criminals sided with aliens/Vulcans will die there forever then Execution As all of them then no longer as all of them then as all of them who cursed them to live beyond death or life then To roam at death good they perished there then as all of gravestones as all muituples as all of them as all of them then used humans as slaves forced to work they Were dead in oldest age good used then then blew more than as all mostly much many more as all ten thousands or mazilllions of as all Wild Vampires as all of them burn them as all of them then lost from here their reincarnated kids birthed too late very last ones to them Smashed then with as all followed vanished never returned from here then stopped mating then it came too late they were unable to breed then Snapped from bodies vanished to Earth changed too late then good as all of them had freaks on Vulcan they are in old age burn them as all of them then too late the cause of death was organ -brain failure smashed looked young again as all of it then never returned then as all of gravestones with coffined bodies into snow then blew up sop more with the deceased howling then Ashes burnt as all of them then Bree Black's religious ringing voice began the Intcantion ceremony my turn to redorate Though I Should to be Wary I Will Venture to be in someplace scary I Turn loose GHOSTING HAUNTS BEETLEJUICE BEETLEJUICE BEETLEJUICE! IT'S SHOWTIME! viciously just Broken freely then was too late he was out of here that was ity granted the Aura Sailor Soldiers/Knights Planetary aura ablities then yelling out the words glowing then suddenly screaming out the planet's name really too loudest but powerful like from the live action series MIRI AURA POWER! MAKE UP! So her siblings with as all both grandparents her mother and father with they Sliced freely then bombed butTransformed as Aura Sailor Miri with powers of Neromancy then Vanished with split halves tore from here both were Good then yelled now Sliced just yelled then Transformed now vanished good guards then killed them suddenly too late they were reincarnated from here then as all of them were warriors with planetary powers then suddenly a nuke bomb set in then a young woman with Dark Brown eyes wrre ice cold as stteel held the Mutation Glaive long raven hair with bangs wearing a planetary seifuku /tiara earrings acted you guessed it :Sailor Saturn violently swinging her tailsman Halt ! was stronger three times Smashed from here wit they both from here yelling out a a warning attack phrase exploding too late roaring with the both three united powers by screaming very too loudest then exploding her true planetary attack from a ruined alien planet and world then yelling mostly powerful she was a Sailor Guardian whisperimg out this Attack to them Screaming out this attack words: Miri DEADLY TOXIC ATOMIC WINTER! WASTELAND! just as all of the newest attacks merged just violently just as all of it with theirs merged from here Blaring from her weapon by ringing her higher but eagle clearer but sharp voice by saying a stock introduction speech was real :Proclaiming Miri the planet of disease the soldier of poison Guardian of Aliments Rules the Mutation Castle is my domain beware you done cruel deeds onto them You are Sterile! she was angry but You are Poisoned! who
was whirling her weapon Ack! They fled I AM SAILOR MIRI HAS RETURNED! then they reported they are what undead but are frozen blew as all of them bring them from here good they never returned then lost from here never aged from here but it was too late burial now they were as all of them by now Heirs as all of them were poisoned but sterilized no longer humans were agents of Chaos.

Pls keep writing more these are really really good and I love them. Also this may sound weird but whenever Twilight ends I feel sad

Nice way of handling a touchy subject. Still not sure how that works with a female hybrid but maybe there will be more detail to come.

awkward haha. Nice. Looking forward to more...

lol, I love your chapter titles. Great way of handling this "event" and very cute at the end.